Comments | np_platform: Celeste Angelina Torchia

beautyfrompain in np_platform

Celeste Angelina Torchia

Nov 04, 2007 01:08

PLAYER DETAILS
Name (or alias): tori
LJ: beautyfrompain
Email: feistydancindiva@yahoo.com
AIM SN: optional uniqsuperfreak
Referred By: myself? mwahaha

( The Application )

year: 7, status: approved, player: tori, gender: female, house: slytherin, blood: halfblood, comm: hogwarts, location: england: manchester, location: england: newcastle, age: students

Comments 5

PENDING np_dumbledore November 15 2007, 05:58:13 UTC

Classes
Transfig, Charms, and DADA are all classes that require wandwork (which she isn't good at) and action (which she isn't good at). Though hard work could justify high scores in these subjects, NEWTS are more advanced and one might expect (especially when she's taking 8) that some of those scores might slip at the higher level. Maybe consider dropping one or two unless she has a good reason to keep so many or consider dropping some of them to As. If you feel that Celeste would carry that many classes and maintain her high scores, explain that a little farther.

House
This is up to you, honestly, but there seemed to be a strong Slytherin vibe in her app. Obviously she's a good student but as illustrated here:

So she spends a lot of her time studying and reading, not necessarily because she enjoys it, but because she knows that it will help her get farther in the world.

She doesn't appear to actually enjoy learning, it reads more like she's driven by ambition. Try expanding on why she would be Ravenclaw over Slytherin.

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Re: PENDING beautyfrompain November 18 2007, 04:35:43 UTC

Okay, so I change her grades/classes for NEWTs... let me know if that's more acceptable ( ... )

Re: PENDING np_dumbledore November 22 2007, 20:01:08 UTC

Oops, I realize I have one more question/edit. The Prefectship. Because her muddled blood is a ways back I thought we might be able to get her a spot (despite the Purebloods Only things we've got going now) assuming her family's stand is very Pureblood and the unfortunate bit of them not actually being PB anymore was covered/overlooked. Unfortunately we do have a Slytherin girl prefect already. If that changes though, I'll let you know.

Re: PENDING beautyfrompain November 23 2007, 02:42:17 UTC

That's totally fine!! I did think of that the other day, but it totally isn't a big deal whether she is a Prefect or not. If the slot opens, thats awesome, but for the time being no worries!! ♥

((though now I'm kind of wishing I'd kept her a ravenclaw. *dies*))

APPROVED! np_dumbledore November 21 2007, 02:56:27 UTC

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