INT. BLOCKBUSTER PARKING LOT - AFTERNOON

[novostella]

I was at work today, restocking our retail section, bored out of my mind.... when suddenly...

My manager: Oh my god Brenda!! Somebody just hit your car!!

Me: WHAT?!!

I quickly run over to the window to see.

My manager: That gray car that's pulling away just hit your car!I ran out of the store, and chased after the car. Luckily, to exit

Comments

:D

[lynge]

Sure must've been...

Some editing done to those conversations, or did you actually SAY "Y'know, while the police are here.... you think they'll run a license plate check for me?" ? :D

Damn funny :)

Sorry your car got hit, but at least you can get that lady to pay up... big scratch/bump?

Re: :D

[novostella]

Oh yeah I said that. That conversation was dead on. The only edit i did was take out things that were said. I just left the good stuff in.

And it wasn't a lady. It was a stupid little teenage girl.