Fic: Very Superstitious (Generation Kill, PG, Poke-Ray)

[novembersmith]

Title: Very Superstitious
Fandom: Generation Kill
Pairing: Poke&Ray gen, mostly
Rating: PG-13 for the filthy, filthy mouths of Marines
Word Count: 3000 words
Summary: "That had better be my own hand on my thigh right now, suddenly gone all leached of melanin and psycho-possessed so I don’t know it," Tony says evenly. He doesn't look down at the grubby

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[ohmygodmuffin]

:D!
Yup, I am definitely also grinning ridiculously. These BOYS. Though, okay, the part where I broke into the hugest grin was this:
“Hey,” Tony says, leaning in the window. “We all gay in the Marine Corps, dog. This is all about homoerotic, man-to-man bonding at its most primeval. Straight up.”

Walt grins down at him from his Mach 19. “True fucking story, brother,” he says, and leans down for a fistbump.

SURPRISE!WALT. I could just see this happening.

I am extremely hopeful about the "...FOR NOW" after your "FIN". &Poke;!

[novembersmith]

Waaaalt, I love him so much, but for some reason he is the HARDEST CHARACTER for me to write! *shakes fist in his general direction* I love him to bits, and yet!

But yaaay, thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it, and heh, yeah, the sequel to this is definitely in the giant pile of WiPs I've been neglecting thanks to ghostfic. Soon, though, I hope!

[puckling]

Can I have your babies?

“Seriously,” Tony says incredulously. “You’re seriously doing this.”

“You’re getting better at this gay chicken shit,” Ray tells him, making a kissy face and then letting go. “Walt would’ve gone all red and giggly on me by now. Hey, has Rudy been sharing the good exfoliants with you? Your skin’s like a baby’s ass, Sergeant.”

This fic? This fic is a thing of *genius*.

“Can I help you, fellow sodomite?” he inquires cheerfully,

ahaahahahahahh Oh Ray-ray, you is the bestest.

“I have not yet begun to fight!” Ray shouts after Tony, and then cranks up the engine, and any response Tony might have made is lost to a cloud of Iraqi dust.

***

FIN... FOR NOW

*is torn* Because you know, I *adore* this it's fantastic, you give amazing Ray and Poke anbd it's just so different in a completely amazing way than anything else that I've read in this fandom, but... Temeraire!Ray/Brad/Nate! I WANTS IT. BUT RAY'S ESCALATION IS SURE TO BE EPIC. *yearns for both AT ONCE*

“What part of DADT is so fucking hard to understand,”

[novembersmith]

My love for YOU knows no bounds! Thank you for this awesome comment! And heh, no worries, the Temeraire/GK OT3 crossover is totally getting written! I have multiple projects open at the moment, actually, although for the moment I'm just basking in having finished my monster bandom epic. \o/

But seriously, thank you so much, I had such fun with this fic, and I really appreciated your comment, like, to bits. <3

[puckling]

And heh, no worries, the Temeraire/GK OT3 crossover is totally getting written!

AWESOMEFACE. I am currently rereading the series for the new book and also a for your fic, let's not lie, but I try not to fangirl fangirls as it only gets creepy that way and leads to me O.O at people in an adoring and slightly stalkerish manner not like I had a slow day at work and read all your Temeraire fic on AO3, wot, I am a productive employee, yes I am! and I am absolutely rolling around with glee in that verse right now.

I'm just basking in having finished my monster bandom epic. \o/

\o/ Seriously bb, I did a big bang not even half as long as yours and I remember how relieved and accomplished I felt when I finished, so you rock those feelings hard core.

[arueh]

GAY CHICKEN! \O/ This is so awesome and gah *g* absolutely perfect~ I just love the easy banters between Ray and Poke xD! It's so much fun to read :DD!

[novembersmith]

Thank you so much! It was a ton of fun to write, and you know together Ray and Poke could talk up a STORM, and just run crazy conversational rings around most of the other men just for shits and giggles. Glad you enjoyed!

[dine]

Ray! Poke!!! this is adorable - Poke totally pwns at gay chicken, but I bet Ray's attempts at a rematch are going to be epic

[novembersmith]

:D :D :D Totally, Poke might start to regret this as the game continues onward, heh. Thanks for reading, and glad you enjoyed it!

[softlyforgotten]

♥___♥

I cannot even pick a favourite part of this.

[novembersmith]

<3 <3 <3 You are the most lovely, srsly. And heee, I had such fun. Poke and Ray are the best for epic rambles, seriously. Except maybe Gerard, which is a crossover idea I am NOT TOUCHING. *staunch*