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minireb123 October 26 2012, 04:40:40 UTC
Wow this one was outstanding =D The idea was so fresh and arghh everything was perfect!

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anonymous October 26 2012, 05:09:57 UTC
dying because i love this so much. <3
I'm shipping Beca/chloe and Beca/Jesse so I love fanfics from both :)
AMAZING.

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anonymous October 26 2012, 15:49:05 UTC
Wow... that was pretty damn awesome.

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anonymous October 27 2012, 05:17:09 UTC
This was so enthralling! Please write more! Absolutely perfect.

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stargazer89 January 16 2013, 13:24:53 UTC
Brilliant idea for a fic, and executed beautifully :) I love how you dont feel the need to finish your fics with the ever-present cliche kiss on the lips and then the end.

I really love the way you paint the picture and you describe their mannerisms. I enjoy that so much :D My favourite line in the whole thing was:

"Chloe hesitates, her heart fluttering pleasantly when Beca finally allows their hands to link together properly."

good job you.
(again!)

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