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novadelphine

The Exception to the Rules

Aug 09, 2009 22:58

Wedging his feet against the worn brackets of the scaffolding he had just effortlessly scaled, Oliver took a second to test the stability of his foot-holds before straightening to his full height and surveying his surroundings.

From his four-storey high vantage point, he could see every inch of the aged industrial quadrant that was spread out at ( Read more... )

smallville, chloe, chlollie: series, oliver

Comments 15

laurelnola August 10 2009, 02:44:59 UTC

Ooh, another cliffhanger! I'm sorry I don't have more time for a thorough review, but suffice it to say I'm loving this update as much as the others! The exchanges between the team were perfect, and I can't wait to see where this goes!

novadelphine August 11 2009, 01:20:02 UTC

No worries, I look forward to your reviews no matter their length! Thanks so much for writing and I'm glad you liked the cliffhanger!

lilmoochie August 10 2009, 02:50:39 UTC

OMG! You know I need to research how to respond to your updates, surf a thesaurus or something. I will have to go with my own vocabulary: Fantabulous, spledifirous, GUH!

How do you do it? Really a blend of humor and fun and then the action and drama...WoW

“Arrow, what’s your status?”

He smiled at her clipped tone, getting his usual kick out of the staunch professionalism Chloe liked to adopt whenever she went into Watchtower mode.

“Trying to get the Fish Stick to take flight,” Oliver answered glibly. “And yes, that’s as hard as it sounds.”

“Wow,” she deadpanned, but he could tell she was smiling through her sarcasm. “We’ve descended to playground rules, huh? Gonna tell him you hate him times infinity now?”

Oliver scoffed.

ROFLMAO! Hilarious...... Can't wait for more..

novadelphine August 11 2009, 01:21:28 UTC

HAHA! GUH! It never gets old! Fantabulous and Splendifirous are pretty good too!

So glad you liked this part and as always, thanks very much for the comments that make me smile!

kryptolori August 10 2009, 08:53:44 UTC

Hey Nova, OMG I'm speechless that is your best chapter yet and that's really saying something. You're really good at blending the humor with the action and the last part when Ollie realised that Chloe was in danger was freakin awesome. I cannot believe the cliffhanger you left us with. Really really looking forward to the next part of this. Who the hell set them up, why do they want Chloe?

novadelphine August 11 2009, 01:24:37 UTC

"Best chapter yet" WOW! Thanks very much! Though it gave me some trouble, I really liked writing this part when it finally got going. Knowing you think it's the best one so far makes it really worthwhile!

I'm also really glad that you liked the last bit with Oliver starting to freak out. That was fun to write as well!

Thanks so much for the great comment! Really appreciate it!

cking1575 August 10 2009, 20:43:01 UTC

"“You have got to be shitting me,” AC called up to him, eyes round and huge as they travelled along the skeletal structure Oliver expected him to climb ( ... )

novadelphine August 11 2009, 01:27:57 UTC

"Rubs hands together staring at the computer waiting"

Haha! Tell me you have snacks nearby, cause I've still gotta write the next part! Hopefully I won't take too long, but I'm not gonna promise... I've managed to break that before.

In any case, thanks so much for taking the time to write and I'm so happy to hear that you enjoyed both the funny stuff and the dramatic stuff!

xtremeroswellia August 13 2009, 13:55:18 UTC

Ugh! It's mean to leave it there! :-p Please update soon or I may go crazy.