The Exception to the Rules

[novadelphine]

Part 14:  Fast Cows and Sacrificial Lambs

Ensconced in the relative peace of Oliver’s guest room, Chloe sat upon the sprawling bed with her overworked laptop wheezing next to her. She’d been putting the poor machine through its paces for the past three hours and even though she loved the aging pile of circuits dearly, she had to admit that the

Comments

[mfsaw2003]

welcome back!!!! love the way you write these characters and the banter in this chapter was particularly strong. can't wait to read more and i hope you've got your writing groove back.

[novadelphine]

Slowly but surely, the writing groove is coming back... thanks very much for commenting!

[rio_arviar]

Hahah, this chapter is hilarious. I love how the characters interact with each other. Great job... can't wait for the next chapter.

=)

[novadelphine]

Really glad this part made you laugh, I always like hearing that. Thanks for taking the time to write a review!

[kryptolori]

Just wanted to say I am absolutely loving this fic, the humour suits the characters so well and you've got each of them spot on! some chlollie fans have been talking about this fic on K-site and our favs are 'please don't feed the ego' and 'fine doesn't wear leather, it wears jeans' hilarious! loving the build up too, such a tease! Can you write for SV please. So looking forward to the next chapter, scrap that I'm looking forward to the rest of the whole story!

[novadelphine]

Thanks for commenting! (On both sites no less! Haha!)