The Exception to the Rules

[novadelphine]

Part 12:  Better to Have Furballs than Nothing At All

“So tell me again how you totally blew your cover and yelled at the guy,” Oliver requested dryly as he and Chloe marched through the back ways of the Metropolis Grand, en route to the hotel’s underground parking facility.

“Cause that’s my favourite part.”

Clinging to his arm and

Comments

[lilmoochie]

OMG! This was so friggin' good. I would love to quote but I would honestly be quoting the ENTIRE thing. I think this is sooo good.

Oh to be Chloe and have to heroes trying to protect you the best way they no how. I hope Chloe figures out soon that Ollie is the one...

Fantastic......

[novadelphine]

"Oh to be Chloe and have to heroes trying to protect you the best way they no how."

Ugh, AMEN. Where can I order said heroes? That'd be delightful.

Thanks so much for commenting. So happy you're really liking this story! I'll never get sick of hearing that!

[ciastulek]

You're good.

It's 1:40 am here and I really need to get some sleep, so all I'll say now is - WOW, you're a really damn good writer. This was masterpiece.

More later :)

[novadelphine]

Thank you so much! Such a nice thing to hear! Now I'm all grinny. Haha!

[cking1575]

I have to agree with lilmoochie... this story is FRIGGIN' good!!!! Great update!

"“So, how’s it going?” Oliver asked cheerfully, his voice ringing out with false merriment as he unofficially called a start to the showdown they were all expecting." LOL Gotta love Ollie's wit and you captured all of their personalities perfectly! Great job can't wait to read the next part!!! :)

[novadelphine]

So happy you enjoyed... I'm kinda thinking this might have been one of my favorite parts to write... guess I like arguments. Haha!

Thanks for taking the time to comment, as always, it's really appreciated!

[ciastulek]

OK, I'm back. I have to agree with lilmoochie too. There are just too many great lines to quote :) so I'll just go with few impressions

[novadelphine]

"It's just so cute, you know like puppies or sleeping babies ;) He's indeed fearless

[sarcastic_fina]

Holy, WOW! lol I've just fallen in love with this story. I sat down and read it in one sitting, unable to stop myself. It's wonderfully written; great structure, intriguing plot, perfect characterization and just the right flow to it. You've got me hooked and i can't wait to read more. So please, update soon!

[novadelphine]

Thank you very much! Really kind comment and it's so appreciated. Happy to hear that you've enjoyed so far (the fact that you read it all in one sitting is some serious high praise!) and hope you enjoy the rest that's still to come!

Thanks again!