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novadelphine

The Exception to the Rules

May 16, 2009 11:54

Part 10: The It Girl Busts a Move

Finishing their long procession down the gala’s red carpet, Chloe and Oliver entered the Metropolis Grand’s hotel lobby with gasps of thorough relief.

“I see spots,” she muttered sullenly as Oliver led her to the massive, sweeping staircase that opened up to the building’s immense ballroom. “Big, splotchy ( Read more... )

smallville, chloe, chlollie: series, oliver

Comments 15

lilmoochie May 17 2009, 23:05:02 UTC

Guh! Guh! ; ). Absolutely faaannntastic. This is sooo good, the sweetness of these to is just wow. You truly are talented, the details and just the story is....WOW! I LOVE IT!

“I’m appealing, am I?” He prodded teasingly, his brow quirking as he pulled her closer, forcing her to crane her neck to meet his eyes.

“Oliver, I’m a heterosexual female,” she stated blandly. “It’s practically mandatory that I recognize your appeal, even if it’s only in passing.”

Chloe finding Ollie appealing is MANDATORY, email this to the writers, so they get the hint. LOL!!

novadelphine May 21 2009, 02:25:42 UTC

Two GUHS! Haha! Love it!

Thanks so much for taking the time to write, it's really appreciated. And I think you're onto something about emailing the writers... I mean, it's Ollie. Not like we'd have to explain why Chloe would be attracted to him. Hello? Obvious.

Thanks again!

miss_morrygan May 21 2009, 12:16:28 UTC

lol yeah I know, no pun intended!^^
and you're welcome...

starry_laa September 27 2009, 21:25:04 UTC

I've been slowly chomping through this, and was going to comment at the end, but I had to comment on this chapter because it warrants a comment ( ... )

novadelphine September 28 2009, 00:30:31 UTC

Wow! Thanks so much for such a wonderful comment! I'm so happy to hear that you're enjoying this story so far. The whole "getting pretty and going to a gala" was so much fun to write and if anything, I stretched it out for all it was worth cause I just always had another interaction or conversation or moment that I absolutely had to add in. To know that you and other readers enjoyed this aspect of the story just gets me grinning like crazy!

Thanks as well for your compliments about the dialogue. Making Chloe, Ollie and the others sound like they're saying things they'd actually say is something I put some effort behind, so it's gratifying to know my obsessing is working!

Finally, thanks for the suggestion about the links. When I get the chance, I'm going to go through and add them in because you're totally right, it would make the story so much easier to read.

Thanks again for taking the time to write. I really appreciate it!