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novadelphine

The Exception to the Rules

May 02, 2009 15:08

A mere three hours after he had collapsed tiredly into his bed, Oliver was jarred awake by the faint buzz of an alarm sounding. Rolling over wearily, he peeled his eyes open and stared at the silent clock on his bedside table that read 5:19 am. Frowning at the quiet device, his eyes swept over his room and landed on the true culprit.

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smallville, chloe, chlollie: series, oliver

Comments 7

lilmoochie May 2 2009, 19:05:18 UTC

I am so very excited that there is another update. this is totally hilarious.. things I love: 1) all of it
2) ALL OF IT
3) all of IT!

“We interrupt your beauty sleep, princess?” AC joked as he took note of Oliver’s dishevelled appearance.

“This is best League meeting ever,” AC observed out loud, blatantly astonished.

Love your JL!! Fantastic....

novadelphine May 2 2009, 21:40:41 UTC

Hey! I'm so happy you liked it and am especially pleased that you found it funny! I can't imagine this group of guys being anything but entertaining!

Thanks so much for commenting!

lilmoochie May 2 2009, 19:08:19 UTC

PS; Love the look of your journal.... :)

novadelphine May 2 2009, 21:39:18 UTC

Thanks! The first one was just too... blah. I'm really liking this one a lot more. The color and the layout are BIG improvements.

If I seem overly excited it's because I was messing around with it FOREVER, trying to finally find something I liked. I'm just happy someone noticed! Haha!

cking1575 May 2 2009, 20:10:33 UTC

OH. MY. GAWD!!!! This was the BEST!!! chapter! I LOVE the interaction between all the guys and then you threw Chloe into the middle. LMFAO!!!

"“It’s morning and there’s yelling,” a small, tired voice suddenly proclaimed, startling the four men. “Why is there yelling in the morning?”"

LOL Kind of reminded me od Jack Sparrow from Pirates of the Caribbean asking, "why is the rum gone?" LOL

"Bart, AC and Victor went slack jawed and Oliver could only sigh heavily as Chloe appeared before them, rubbing her eyes sleepily and absolutely swimming in the pair of men’s pyjamas she was wearing.

“This is best League meeting ever,” AC observed out loud, blatantly astonished. " :)

LOL!!!

The interaction between the guys is freaking AWESOME!!! It's so true to life, I can totally see this actually happening! You did an incredible job with the chapter. I can't wait to read what you have planned next!
:)

novadelphine May 2 2009, 21:44:09 UTC

Haha! Really glad you liked it! Thanks!

Oh, and you're observation about Jack Sparrow and "why is the rum gone", that never occurred to me, but maybe that where my inspiration came from! I really wanted Chloe to have the whole 'I'm not awake and this is all way beyond me at the moment vibe', and that's definitely a Jack Sparrow quality! (Ha! Now you've got me thinking about Johnny Depp... Man he was funny in that movie...)

Happy to hear that I did the boys justice (pun intended) and thanks very much for taking the time to write!

sarahol1 May 4 2009, 22:51:11 UTC

AHHH, adorable! I loved it! Great chapter! I love anything the rest of the boys pop up in, especially when they're written with their personalities intact, so this chapter was an extra-special present for me! Bart being obsessed with celebrity gossip was hilarious and entertainingly IC to me as well. Great job, and I hope you update again soon!