Drabble #2 for Ithilien

Oct 24, 2008 22:08

Title: Doubt ( Read more... )

drabble, fanfic, luke/noah

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miss_smp October 25 2008, 02:50:45 UTC
G....WOW!!! hee hee hee

I love that you are so versatile!!! **wub**....NOW WHERE'S MY SMUT!!! :P

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nouveau_monday October 25 2008, 03:13:47 UTC
smut? smut? what is this smut of which you speak?

my smut. she is broken curremtly. but this was fun to write.

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miss_smp October 25 2008, 03:51:13 UTC
but, but...BROKEN? Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!! **cries :P**

well I guess I'll just have to be patient til the smut gets fixed and until then I'll be loving any drabbles you grace us with!!!

I *heart* monday

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sweetiejelly October 25 2008, 02:57:11 UTC
Love it, Monday. Basketball to work off some of the tension makes perfect sense to me. And actually, if he were to have ran into Kevin there, that would have made sense as well...

I love that you're drabbling :D That note was so adorable and the reaction too.

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nouveau_monday October 25 2008, 03:14:50 UTC
If he had run into kevin, he totally would have chucked the ball at his head and freaked out. this luke was way too much of a diva for my own patience.

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sweetiejelly October 25 2008, 03:30:04 UTC
He did seem to be in a mood here. I meant the show though... since they were going to bring Kevin on board. It might have been even messier if Luke ran into Kevin while Noah was abroad. It'd also given Van some chance to work more during that time, but I digress. :p

p.s. I sorta emailed the show about that arm licking/biting scene. But I sorta think it's all going to some poor intern somewhere hitting the delete button over and over. :p

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nouveau_monday October 25 2008, 03:33:55 UTC
oh yes, if he had seen kevin there, it actually could have been really cool. which is why it didn't happen.

that's awesome about emailing the show. i wonder if we should all bombard them with non R rated scenes we think they should show?

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ithilien22 October 25 2008, 04:58:52 UTC
Oh, this is gorgeous. I love you so much for confronting your fear of writing from Luke's perspective, especially when this is the kind of amazing gem that we get when you do! The imagery is so...tactile. I can't even think of the right word, but it's like I'm right there on the court with him, so close I can taste the sweat (and that nagging bite of doubt), you know? I just love it (and I wish I had better words to tell you so).

Sorry I haven't been around. Still feel awful times terrible but these drabbles are WAY better than chicken noodle soup!

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kissmedirty October 25 2008, 05:27:23 UTC
"Love you till I'm stupid"

*sigh*

so much wonderfullness :D

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shizumaslover October 25 2008, 05:47:11 UTC
Fuck in a G rated fic? LOLOLOL ILU MONDAY. 8D

Amazing, as always. I could really feel his frustration. And this --

Salt froze on his skin as he panicked.

-- was wonderful. Such lovely descriptions. <3

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nouveau_monday October 25 2008, 13:00:17 UTC
*giggles* i totally forgot about the fact that there was swearing. I guess I should change that, huh. Whoops!

glad you could feel the frustration. i'm not so good with description, so i'm trying to work on that.

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