Fic: Moving Closer; NC-17

[nouveau_monday]

Title: Moving Closer
Author: nouveau_monday
Pairing: Noah/Luke
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 2.4k
Summary: This is a remix of ithilien22's amazing Farm Boy
Spoilers: None
Disclaimer: Nothing is better than barn!sex.
Notes: This was perhaps the scariest thing I've ever written because I had to work around the incredible framework of Ithilien's story and the

Comments

[vertigo66]

Heh, you did it again: "waste" should be "waist."

Barn sex is so hot. :D

[nouveau_monday]

I'm such a dork. I always try to correct it and seem to miss it. Thanks.

Barn sex is so much fun to write. I had no idea. And top!noah. God. that was weird. good, but weird.

[frances_veritas]

UM. Laura's fic killed me dead so I have no words for what this did to me.

This pretty much sums it up.

"Want it rough, Baby. Want you to take me hard, up against a stall, over a saddle. Doesn't matter how exactly. I've imagined it every which way anatomically possible and some that might not even be." He bit Noah's earlobe, purred into his hear, whimpers at the touch Noah's hand on his cock. "You think you can do that to me? Own me, fill me, fuck me into next week. Think you could do that for me sometime?"

YESPLEASEHOLYSHITHOTHOTHOTHOTHOTHOTNNNNNNNNGGGGGGGHHHHHOTHOTHOT.

[nouveau_monday]

oh you. you are the sweetest. Laura's fic killed me dead, and i wish i could have written my remix with the poetry that she has to her words. That being said, I'm tickled that this was "YESPLEASEHOLYSHITHOTHOTHOTHOTHOTHOTNNNNNNNNGGGGGGGHHHHHOTHOTHOT".

[divainpink15]

Mmm...This was WONDERFUL. I LOVED the original, and this was different enough that it was just as good! The perfect blend of mind-blowingly sexy, and totally romantic at the same time :D

[j525]

I have read this a gazillion times and i can't believe I never commented. this piece is amazing. It is so hot but so incredibly sweet at the same time. Not just hot sex but just a connection. You are so good at getting the interaction, emotions just everything. You are just so amazing. I love your writing. It just makes me feel. So romantic and hot. ahhhhhhh!!!!

[nouveau_monday]

thanks, doll. i just re-read it myself to see what you were commenting on, and it's funny because i don't think i deserve any credit for this. This is allllll Ithilien. Seriously. All of it. Hers is so freaking good and I just wanted to do justice to it.

[valenti1965]

One of my all time fav fanfics..read it a few times but don't think I have reviewed it before...loved it so much! xxx