Comments | notyourshot: non-malleable clay

notyourshot

non-malleable clay

Sep 30, 2009 00:36

Non-malleable clay

Spencer/Brendon | PG | 1111 words.

Inspired by this prompt. Thanks to hello_ilu for being awesome and quickly looking it over.

End-of-the-world AU. Lots of fog.

( Brendon nods, )

brendon/spencer, writing, fic, we_are_cities

Comments 12

poisonrationale September 30 2009, 04:26:31 UTC

Wow. This is really unsettling, but in a great, beautiful way. Coming together through disaster. Wow. I can tell this is going to linger with me for a while. I wish I could think of something better to say about it.

Love. <3

notyourshot October 1 2009, 12:12:15 UTC

Thank you ♥

wavesofwood September 30 2009, 07:05:06 UTC

OH GOD HOW AM I MEANT TO GO TO SCHOOL IN HALF AN HOUR AND PRETEND TO FUNCTION NORMALLY AFTER READING THIS?

you amaze me. breathtaking.

notyourshot October 1 2009, 12:13:21 UTC

YOU. I AM SWOONING.

thank you bb.

rawkenr0ll September 30 2009, 15:06:43 UTC

this just sets me into an anarchist rage because there are places where this isn't even so far off from reality. this isn't even science fiction.

notyourshot October 1 2009, 12:14:34 UTC

weeeeell. i'm not sure if sending someone into an anarchist rage is what i expected! but that's cool too, because, yeah, i know. and i feel so powerless, too.

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notyourshot October 1 2009, 12:15:35 UTC

thank youuuu. me too <3

heartequals September 30 2009, 16:12:42 UTC

and their minds are all spirals and clouds.

I adore this line so much, I think it is so wonderful.

I love the atmosphere you create in this story -- I find it as engulfing the fog you describe. Love the last line as well, oh my gosh.

notyourshot October 1 2009, 12:16:50 UTC

Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it.

I really tried to capture that white, humid and, especially, suffocating atmosphere, you know?

♥