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Jun 15, 2009 21:54

Something for me, something for you. (Or both?) I want all of you to describe something for me in the comment. Not just any something, but a sunrise/dusk. Can be long, or just a line. In any for you want, it can be a dialogue, a simple orthodox description--go wild.

writing, prompt, pretty please with a cherry on top

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justhush June 16 2009, 04:10:42 UTC
He slides his fingers into Spencer's palm, squeezing tight. It's hot and dry outside, musky red sunlight clinging to the edges of the sky, to the curve of Spencer's jaw. The shingles feel rough underneath his other palm, but he likes the texture of it, sandpapery and cool.

"Ryan?" Spencer asks, and squeezes back.

Ryan leans over, and his nod against Spencer's neck is his answer.

"Do you think what we're doing is stupid?"

What we're doing. Ryan's mind flashes through all the things he could mean by that: sneaking up onto the roof, sitting so close to the edge, holding hands ----

"With the band, I mean," Spencer mumbles. "Risking like -- everything. Not going to college."

Ryan stills. Does he regret it? The sun keeps sinking lower, and there isn't enough light to read Spencer's expression. "Maybe." Ryan squeezes his free hand into a fist, dragging his knuckles against the roof. "But it'll be worth it."

Spencer doesn't say anything else, and they watch the sky go blue and then indigo and then black together.

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notyourshot June 16 2009, 04:16:27 UTC
eeeeee. so pretty.
i like how it's almost like the sun clings to spencer and not vice versa, how they're there throughout darkness and light. or maybe i'm just looking to much into it? it's lovely anyway.

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justhush June 16 2009, 16:09:29 UTC
♥!

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youretheartist June 16 2009, 13:19:54 UTC
Oh hai thar new layout. I don't like it but I don't dislike either...

You know how I tend to associate things with no relation whatsoever. For me there is one word to describe the summer dusk.

Augustana.

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