Oh, oh ooooh! You so often break my heart with your writing because they are so utterly sweet and so crushingly sad at the same time! I'm really glad you ended up doing a side story for this one, 'cause I loved it dearly.
sergio in a over-sized yellow tee with skinny jeans, i could honestly picture it too well. and angst fernando jerking off in the shower. oh god what have i turned into?
i'm so happy to see these two again. i love watching the early stages of their relationship shake out and i am all for you continuing to explore this universe here, so side story away, jk! i'll be waiting for more!
You know that I love just about everything that Cesc says. You fucked him, you liked it, and you like him. And I love: Hmmm, well I’m no expert, but I would guess that when a guy, especially a guy that we’d assumed was previously straight, tells you that you are his that it means……well you are his I guess
I love the description of them in the shower, how it starts so slowly and Sergio is just rubbing Fernando's chest and how turned on he is... Perfect. But my favorite line in the entire piece is this: He’d imagined, countless times, what Sergio fucking him would be like (he’d been too nervous to bring it up over the summer), but he never pictured this-being fucked slowly against the shower door, and he never imagined it feeling this damn good.
This feels like such an important moment, this entire chapter, and I'm really glad you wrote it. I think it shows them at such a lovely point together, questioning a little. I LOVE THIS which you know. ♥
As you know it just started out as me wanting to write shower sex, which I'd never done before, but, of course, I couldn't just make it a PWP with these two, it had to mean something & it had to be an important moment for them. Thank you so much!
Of course Cesc is amazing, well because he is, Cesc and his dirty mouth.
HELLO ChileanSergioRamos! And I meant to tell you that I laughed when Sergio slipped a little because I had warned you that showers are slippery and I didn't want anyone to get hurt.
I added that line actually, after you mentioned it, really because showers are slippery, and not everything always goes smoothly, so it added a touch of realism as well. (it was also good point so thank you!)
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i love watching the early stages of their relationship shake out and i am all for you continuing to explore this universe here, so side story away, jk! i'll be waiting for more!
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thank you so much for continuing to comment.
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You fucked him, you liked it, and you like him.
And I love: Hmmm, well I’m no expert, but I would guess that when a guy, especially a guy that we’d assumed was previously straight, tells you that you are his that it means……well you are his I guess
I love the description of them in the shower, how it starts so slowly and Sergio is just rubbing Fernando's chest and how turned on he is... Perfect. But my favorite line in the entire piece is this:
He’d imagined, countless times, what Sergio fucking him would be like (he’d been too nervous to bring it up over the summer), but he never pictured this-being fucked slowly against the shower door, and he never imagined it feeling this damn good.
This feels like such an important moment, this entire chapter, and I'm really glad you wrote it. I think it shows them at such a lovely point together, questioning a little. I LOVE THIS which you know. ♥
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As you know it just started out as me wanting to write shower sex, which I'd never done before, but, of course, I couldn't just make it a PWP with these two, it had to mean something & it had to be an important moment for them. Thank you so much!
Of course Cesc is amazing, well because he is, Cesc and his dirty mouth.
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And I meant to tell you that I laughed when Sergio slipped a little because I had warned you that showers are slippery and I didn't want anyone to get hurt.
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I added that line actually, after you mentioned it, really because showers are slippery, and not everything always goes smoothly, so it added a touch of realism as well. (it was also good point so thank you!)
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