I want to start by saying that Cesc and Aaron are really cute together. It's nice to see Cesc so into someone and I like the way they fit together.
I can never take Jack crying. Not even in fic. The utter disappointment here feels incredibly real. Been writing your feelings? :( ♥
Emma is such a good person. How did you make me like her? How?? I love her line at the end though: “Sergio, you should tell him. You owe him…..and me, that much.” It's true. He owes them both. I also love when she says he loves Fernando too much for there to be room in his heart for both of them. Even though I knew that line was coming, I was still moved by it.
Sami is so wonderful. “I knew it. I knew as soon as I saw you two together."
Fernando's phone call has me on the edge of my seat because I know whatever he has to tell Sergio is probably going to make me weep openly.
<333 Even on days when my foul mood slips into every fiber of my being, your comments have the ability to put a smile on my face. You are always just too kind.
Cesc & Aaron are my happy place in this fic (and right now, well mostly just Aaron)
I can never take Jack crying. Not even in fic. The utter disappointment here feels incredibly real. Been writing your feelings? :(
yes, yes I have been. Although i was sobbing & drinking at the same time, it was messy.
I'm so happy to see your response to Sergio, I thought you might not handle his being at fault (for both his break up w/Emma & for never returning to Fernando) well. I think we got a lot of Fernando feeling guilty in the last fic, but now we need to see that Sergio has a lot of regret as well.
Again, your comment just makes me smile. You are too wonderful you know that right?
Leaving you nice comments is the absolute least I can do after everything you do for me.
Sergio being at fault is definitely, definitely hard for me to take. I was so angry with Fernando in the last one (even though I wasn't pleased that Sergio left, it was ultimately easier to take if I could just be pissed with Fernando). I think it just makes it worse that they both are full of regret, that they both could have done things differently. It's not an easy story of, "This person messed up and now they aren't together." It's the fact that despite how much they love(d) each other, it fell apart.
I am not too wonderful. Not by a long shot. Haha I am going to work now where I will be internally whining and hating on my own life and secretly contemplating this wonderful story. ♥
I think it just makes it worse that they both are full of regret, that they both could have done things differently. It's not an easy story of, "This person messed up and now they aren't together." It's the fact that despite how much they love(d) each other, it fell apart.
I think this came out a bit in the final chapter of Co&DmW, that they were both at fault. Now I'm just trying to flesh that out a bit. So they both are still to blame, but now we are seeing more of Sergio's side.
Love it!!! kinda feel bad bout ranting bout Emma but you write her so lovely and understanding ... Can't wait for the rest :-) Sorry bout how pointless this comment is but at least its better than my previous crazyness :-) Your Cesc= ridiculously cute
Oh I can't wait to see what happens when he tells Nando! I wonder why he never came back : ( It's so sad to see them both so full of regrets. They were obviously so in love with each other. I really hope they can fix it.
Oh, so sad! But Emma had to have suspected and she handled it with class and love.
I know I'm being a big ass baby but I really, really, really want Fernando and Sergio get back together. Too much sadness around lately. :-(
And btw, now that April Fool's is over, you know that I think your portrayal of Horsey was subtle and nuanced, right? I would die of sadness if you really thought that I felt your characterization of a young turtle ripped away from a loving home, serving as a pawn in a game he didn't understand was one dimensional. I would never think that! xoxo
I love to make you LOL. I just wanted to make a public declaration of my admiration for your mad turtle whisperin' skillz. It has been written and decreed! And now you provide me Bieb fodder for Headbands and Heartbreak. Are you MAGIC? ;-) I think you just might be.
Emma definitely deserves a classy man to make her happy.
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I want to start by saying that Cesc and Aaron are really cute together. It's nice to see Cesc so into someone and I like the way they fit together.
I can never take Jack crying. Not even in fic. The utter disappointment here feels incredibly real. Been writing your feelings? :( ♥
Emma is such a good person. How did you make me like her? How?? I love her line at the end though: “Sergio, you should tell him. You owe him…..and me, that much.”
It's true. He owes them both.
I also love when she says he loves Fernando too much for there to be room in his heart for both of them. Even though I knew that line was coming, I was still moved by it.
Sami is so wonderful. “I knew it. I knew as soon as I saw you two together."
Fernando's phone call has me on the edge of my seat because I know whatever he has to tell Sergio is probably going to make me weep openly.
I love this.
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Cesc & Aaron are my happy place in this fic (and right now, well mostly just Aaron)
I can never take Jack crying. Not even in fic. The utter disappointment here feels incredibly real. Been writing your feelings? :(
yes, yes I have been. Although i was sobbing & drinking at the same time, it was messy.
I'm so happy to see your response to Sergio, I thought you might not handle his being at fault (for both his break up w/Emma & for never returning to Fernando) well. I think we got a lot of Fernando feeling guilty in the last fic, but now we need to see that Sergio has a lot of regret as well.
Again, your comment just makes me smile. You are too wonderful you know that right?
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Sergio being at fault is definitely, definitely hard for me to take. I was so angry with Fernando in the last one (even though I wasn't pleased that Sergio left, it was ultimately easier to take if I could just be pissed with Fernando). I think it just makes it worse that they both are full of regret, that they both could have done things differently. It's not an easy story of, "This person messed up and now they aren't together." It's the fact that despite how much they love(d) each other, it fell apart.
I am not too wonderful. Not by a long shot. Haha I am going to work now where I will be internally whining and hating on my own life and secretly contemplating this wonderful story. ♥
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I think it just makes it worse that they both are full of regret, that they both could have done things differently. It's not an easy story of, "This person messed up and now they aren't together." It's the fact that despite how much they love(d) each other, it fell apart.
I think this came out a bit in the final chapter of Co&DmW, that they were both at fault. Now I'm just trying to flesh that out a bit. So they both are still to blame, but now we are seeing more of Sergio's side.
I am not too wonderful. LIES! You are amazing!
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So why he never came back?
Hope Frank isn't living in Fernando's house already, I don't want a brocken Sergio.
Love this so so much:)
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<333 thank you!!
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Can't wait for the rest :-)
Sorry bout how pointless this comment is but at least its better than my previous crazyness :-)
Your Cesc= ridiculously cute
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I'm glad you like Cesc, I always worry that he'll come off too immature, which seems to always be the case when people write Cesc in fic.
Don't worry about the "craziness" of the comment, it just shows that you are into the fic, which, for me, is a big compliment.
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It's so sad to see them both so full of regrets. They were obviously so in love with each other. I really hope they can fix it.
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In the next chapter, Sergio reveals all (well hopefully he will, I'm still working on it ;p)
thank you so much for commenting!
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I know I'm being a big ass baby but I really, really, really want Fernando and Sergio get back together. Too much sadness around lately. :-(
And btw, now that April Fool's is over, you know that I think your portrayal of Horsey was subtle and nuanced, right? I would die of sadness if you really thought that I felt your characterization of a young turtle ripped away from a loving home, serving as a pawn in a game he didn't understand was one dimensional. I would never think that! xoxo
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Yes, Emma was a rock star, in my mind she goes out & finds a class act who treats her like a princess.
No spoilers, you'll have to wait till chapter 5
thanks, as always, for commenting!
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Emma definitely deserves a classy man to make her happy.
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