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Jun 18, 2010 13:55

With Saboteur off pursuing his own path, what will become of the Communist agents? And what was with Valentin and his supposed meeting with some beautiful woman?

Answers to these questions, as well as some bad behavior and the usefulness of Nightshade can be found in...( Chapter 10- Garter )

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phrenia June 19 2010, 22:20:18 UTC
Quite unexpected!

I feel like there's something missing between this chapter, the last chapter, and the chapter before - like Interludes that didn't quite make it. Too jumpy, perhaps?

Maybe I'm just more curious about what's going on behind the scenes, between the scenes.

Of course, I'm always hungry for more, so... /gogogoodwriting

Up to you, of course.

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notorious713 June 21 2010, 09:34:42 UTC
Sorry if its jumpy. It's more episodic than a real novel. I'll try to post one more before I leave for Europe.

:) Thanks for reading.

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phrenia June 21 2010, 20:02:03 UTC
No apologies necessary - just want to give helpful feedback. The format's fine. :D

Yay!

Happy to do so. You're one of the biggest reasons I check LJ.

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notorious713 June 23 2010, 01:05:27 UTC
Posting this is pretty much the only reason I have an LJ.

You are always helpful.

Sometimes I miss our Epic Evil campaign.

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