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The Cold War Continues
Apr 09, 2010 17:49
Communist agents, a Paris hotel, and some old Nazis collide. Things could get gory...
(
Chapter Six- Runway
)
writing
,
paris confidential
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phrenia
May 11 2010, 04:40:08 UTC
Pacing is even better! Great action scene. I can feel the tension.
Typo note: "A burst of sound came from the northernmost bedroom as the door few open. Everyone turned, attention jolting away from the intruders."
Should be, ".. as the door flew open."
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Typo note: "A burst of sound came from the northernmost bedroom as the door few open. Everyone turned, attention jolting away from the intruders."
Should be, ".. as the door flew open."
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