Validation pt 3
Title: Validation
Chapter: 3/?
Author: notochrasy
Rating: PG
Pairing: Kris/Luhan, and others, potentially
Genre: AU, Drama, Sci-Fi, Dystopian
Summary:55 years after a new radioactive mineral has been discovered and used as a new nuclear energy source for Earth ( Read more... )
Chapter: 3/?
Author: notochrasy
Rating: PG
Pairing: Kris/Luhan, and others, potentially
Genre: AU, Drama, Sci-Fi, Dystopian
Summary:55 years after a new radioactive mineral has been discovered and used as a new nuclear energy source for Earth ( Read more... )
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it's super late and i'm nearly incoherent so i will probably go back and read through this again tomoRROW when i am actually aware of my surroundings
i always appreciate reading something with idk, substance? t after all the light hearted fluff i've been reading lately. not to say that fluff is bad but it feels nice to really be able to settle into a story that has some MEAT you know
i loved seeing chanyeol and his inherent goofiness and can't wait to see more kris/chanyeol interactions. and of course can't wait to see what is up with yixing! nice cliffhanger there, definitely built up some nice suspense and so i eagerly await the next chapter. keep up the good work!
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haha, that's fine, get some sleep :P
i definitely understand, i'm pretty much the same but at the same time i'm incredibly lazy, so i never can commit to reading a meaty fic (same goes with dramas tbh lol) - i think i generally leave my headspace for reading meaty books haha
it's so hard to incorporate his personality into a fic that is quite..serious, because i don't want him to just be "comic relief" ;A;
thank you for reading and commenting <3
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oMG krisyeol interactions and KRISHAN!! its so cute ILU. The cliffhanger though, now im too excited for the next chapter :')
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yes hehehe cliffhanger
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And hey secret WADDUP KRIS *snicker*.
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Maybe your bias is secretly a butcher :D
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btw, I read my first chapter translated into vietnamese, WOW it sounds so cool haha. I read some to my mother and she says your translating is amazing and you made my original story sound so much more interesting ^___^
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Like, in all seriousness. This is my fav on going fic so far.
It's just plain amazing. I'm at fucking AWE.
Lulu being all expressionless when Baekhyun made that statement, agh. I wanted them to continue their conversation T_T Lu pressing Kris into saying more about him being the test subject.
I'm guessing that him being .... frozen (coz I forgot the word and dont wanna go up again, cryo... s...pic...something OTL) had certain repercussion to his health, right. Him getting those tremors. But that pretty umh, wow, coz. The room is temperature automated and he was shivering and cold? Shit man.
Eee. Chanyeollie likes Baekhyunieee.
Yixing Yixing Yixing, WHAT did you do. >__> And why not tell Lu...
Urgh, love this story. Amazing.
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Haha originally the conversation lasted a lot longer but to keep with the chapter world limit I set for myself I had to cut out some stuff (but all info that can be derived from the conversation will eventually come up later on anyway lol)
Technically he wasn't ever completely frozen (technology is not yet that advanced yet) but yes he was tested in very low temperatures and it did have repercussion on his health. But granted, a large part of it is psychological and stems from the fact that he's been accidentally conditioned to associate the low temperature tests with not wearing socks to sleep (but that's a minor point) x)
BAEKYEOL FTW. Their friendship is cute lol.
Yixing has found a part-time job as a butcher...LOL JK, let's see what happens with him 8D
Thank you again for reading and commenting ;A; <33
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I was a bit confused when he mentioned him not having socks. Like, Yo Yifan, what does that have to do with anything?
But, hey, that's pretty cool.
lmfao as a butcher xxD
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