[CSI] Something Less Than Love

[marcasite]

Something Less Than Love
Sara, Sara/Grissom, 821 words, PG-13, "set series-4, angst"
She had hoped that she would feel better if he could hurt even a fraction of the amount she does now. It’s scary how disappointed she is.

Written for mingsmommy who won me at the Queensland Auction. This is just one of several stories I will write for her throughout the

Comments

[howlinchickhowl]

Hi, I just wanted to say I thought that this was lovely. I very rarely read CSI fic anymore, but something told me to read this one, and that something has my gratitude :D

Sara around this time just breaks my heart, she's so lost, and I really love the way you've captured her weird mix of longing and apathy and resignedness(?), it was wonderful.

I think you should definitely write more Sara :)

[marcasite]

Hi!
Thank you so much for reading this. I use to write Sara (and GSR) all the time but slowly moved away to other fandoms. It's good to step back in from time to time.

Thank you again for your comment and for taking a risk on reading this ♥

[marcasite]

Ah thank you so much! This Sara is so lost that I feel like I need to help her find her way in the next story :)

Thanks again for the lovely comment and for reading this ♥

[mingsmommy]

This was absolutely gorgeous...but then you always manage to blow me away with how lyrical your writing is. It just enthralls me how you can make pain so beautiful.

I love the progression of this, how it's almost gentle as she falls deeper and deeper in to the pain and despair.

Most beautiful lines:

This feels like something less than love.

AND

She can only blame herself but hates him a little for giving her hope.

The whole thing is intense and beautiful, but those two lines are so full of meaning and hurt.

Just lovely. I wish I had your talent.

[marcasite]

Umm, thank you so much for lovely comment. I'm glad you liked this and I hope to continue to write stories for you for your generous donation.

Your comments are always so well thought out and full of such love. Thank you again for everything ♥

[smacky30]

Now I'm going to quote Ming because she finally said what I've been trying to say since I read your first story.

It just enthralls me how you can make pain so beautiful

This...just this. You are quite amazing.

[marcasite]

Ah, thank you so much. I appreciate the lovely comment ♥

[sockglue]

Really beautiful, yet sad piece. Read through it twice and I think I could keep reading it again and again.

[marcasite]

That is such a lovely comment, thank you so much ♥