Comments | notkcinkcity: Look At Me

notkcinkcity

Look At Me

Oct 17, 2010 21:08

The first time I ask him, he’s jerking me off. I don’t see it then, but I do now.

The whiskey tonight was some good shit - it's like my veins are on fire. I'm straddled across his lap on a couch somewhere (his room? my room? hell, what city are we even in?) and he’s working a fucking awesome hickey into my collarbone. One hand's down the back of my ( Read more... )

adam lambert tommy joe ratliff

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glambini October 18 2010, 05:02:28 UTC

I love the way it read on your LJ -- the fonts are better! :D Thanks for this bday present for the fans on Tommy's day! ^v^

Reading again, and I like it even more if that's possible. :D

xoxoxo
<333u

notkcinkcity October 18 2010, 05:12:20 UTC

Thanks for helping me make it better! <3 <3

eowyn_for_adam October 18 2010, 05:20:37 UTC

This is so amazingly good!
I didn't even know you wrote fanfic, just that you made awesome videos!
Gotta go and read your other stuff now!
Hugs,
E

notkcinkcity October 18 2010, 13:13:17 UTC

Thx! I kinda don't - this is only my 2nd attempt. Making videos is WAY easier! You writers pour your guts into this stuff, I got all teary-end and shit writing this! haha

debbieanneh October 19 2010, 17:23:01 UTC

Wow! Just Wow! Loved it soooooo much! <3333

notkcinkcity October 19 2010, 23:53:22 UTC

Awww, thank you! That makes me all bouncy & giggly! :D

viiidestinyxiii October 19 2010, 18:20:26 UTC

Beautiful. I love the way you wrote and explained things. Very lovely. :)

notkcinkcity October 19 2010, 23:56:49 UTC

Thanks! I don't think Tommy knew what he was feeling, but I'm glad the emotions came across!

rboyz October 21 2010, 09:19:10 UTC

\o/ You did it!!! \o/
You came back and did it again and, OMG, this was just incredible!! Beautiful, poignant, thoughtful, so well constructed. Just PERFECT in its honesty.
I'm absolutely giddy with excitement here for you! Can you tell?!? :D Yes, yes, YES!! Keep writing! Thank you for this! I LOVED it! <333

notkcinkcity October 21 2010, 22:26:56 UTC

Awww, thx! Your comment on my first fic made me think "Well, maybe I'll try again!" Thanks for the encouragement!! <3

rboyz October 22 2010, 06:30:43 UTC

You so deserve it! I just love the way you write. There's definitely something uniquely special about it.
And I'm so flattered that you took my words to heart. Honestly, your latest work followed so closely on the heels of my first comment to you, that I never thought there could have been a connection.
You have true talent and I'm thrilled that you believed enough in yourself to go for it again. I do hope you decide to write again. And if you do, you know I'll be here for you! <333