mid-january comment fic meme

Jan 15, 2012 13:27

It's January 15, and I promised a mid-January Comment Fic Meme so here it is!


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samantha890 January 16 2012, 11:24:05 UTC
Something to do with how Jensen feels when he watches Jared smiling/laughing/being happy. Can be outsider POV (Gen or Danneel would be love!) or a Jensen POV. Any pairing works with me.

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the_rant_girl January 17 2012, 02:31:15 UTC
eik, first thing I've written in a while, words happened, heh

It’s infectious you know.

Jared’s smile.

Don’t know that there’s a person alive could disagree with me. ‘Specially none that met him. When you’re in Jared’s presence you don’t need to be looking at him to be taken in by his smile.

Jensen’s smirking already and he can’t even see him. Got his eyes closed.

Pretty sure he’s getting a sneak peak out from under those pretty lashes of his.

Even under the haze of booze and sun, Jared is Jensen’s true north. They’re laughing now. They got me too. Kinda missed the punch line though I doubt either of them would even notice.

Jensen’s eyes are open now.

They really are something.

Up close and personal it only ever takes the one look. Still makes me weak in the knees. Even if it’s directed elsewhereI’ve never seen him as happy as he is when he’s looking at Jared ( ... )

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samantha890 January 17 2012, 04:28:40 UTC
This is so cute, bb! Thank youuuu! <333

Not even when the universe slumps back into place when his attention shifts back to me.

Love. <3

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the_rant_girl January 17 2012, 14:52:55 UTC
Thanks so much! Glad you liked it :D <333

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tmn1966 January 17 2012, 09:36:27 UTC
I love your ending line. The whole thing, actually, had me smiling. :)

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the_rant_girl January 17 2012, 15:03:24 UTC
:D Thanks so much! <333

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sienata January 17 2012, 16:03:48 UTC
neat little story. i love the one line delivery, and i can totally imagine someone feeling like that around them, like they're standing just outside the special circle looking in. thanks!

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the_rant_girl January 17 2012, 19:58:04 UTC
Thank you very much, and yeah that's it exactly, and well it's always fun to draw windows into that special bubble *nods* <333

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dugindeep January 19 2012, 19:12:16 UTC
So sweet!

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the_rant_girl January 19 2012, 20:01:18 UTC
Thank you! <3333

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