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Apr 02, 2008 19:09

in my heart
confusion dwells
in my head
i always fail

who'd have thought
my current pain
options wrought
all from vain

few seem worthy
those of course
out of reach
no sam morse

change of audience
i wish i could
your sadness resolve
of course i would

dont you doubt
fight the flow
it will work out
if truth you show

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bestfriendshurt April 3 2008, 00:36:32 UTC
i think it's funny when you put names to rhyme.

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nothinglorious April 3 2008, 01:05:02 UTC
its shows how terrible i am

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nothinglorious April 3 2008, 01:07:23 UTC
well actually that name is important. that line gives the most insight into the poems meaning than any other

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bestfriendshurt April 3 2008, 02:24:31 UTC
well on another poem you put thomas. maybe they're all their for a purpose, but when you don't know, it just sticks out.

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