In which I post some writin'

[notbamf]

Among a few of the reasons I've completely vanished from LiveJournal is that I am doing a bit of writing every single day. It's been going really well; I've been pacing myself, but not forcing anything. Allowing long-term and short-term ideas to come together and mesh in my head. As far as Just For Fun writing goes featuring my favorite characters

Comments

[yaoi_slut]

Heh, ok, so I read it, and I'm wondering now, do you want con crit? Are are you just hoping people will be like, yay good job!!!

If you don't want any, I'll at least share with you which quotes stood out to me as particularly funny.

[notbamf]

Well, yeah. I want that. Why wouldn't I?

[yaoi_slut]

Some people don't want honest feedback, and I didn't want to put the effort into it if it only would have offended you. Believe me, there are lots of people out there who get defensive when you try to point out anything remotely wrong with their story. But ok, cool, I'll reply again in a bit here.

[sensorium]

I really like it so far. It reminds me of how middle school was (not high school, you say? Well, I went to an all girl's high school, so I can't really compare it to high school. Plus I only went to high school for 2 years). And oh god, I was one of those not-athletic, not-hot (at least not by my classmates' standards) girls who never got picked for sports. I hated gym class.

I think it sounds like a high schooler and is an interesting premise... I look forward to reading more. The only criticism that I have is that sometimes you start a thought and don't quite finish it, which is fine for if you were speaking, and of course, the tone of the writing is very conversational, it just doesn't carry over to print all that well sometimes. Like, some of the sentences were a little hard to follow.