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The Search Is Over (1/1)

Jan 28, 2012 20:32

Title: The Search Is Over
Author: tromana
Rating: PG-13
Characters: Jane/Angela, Jane/Lisbon
Summary: Jane trying to find a way to move on...
Disclaimer: Not mine.
Notes: Written for steelesimz as a part of the Holiday Fics challenge. Not one of my favourites. Such is life.

( I’ve got a lot to tell you. )

character: teresa lisbon, pairing: jane/angela, character: angela ruskin-jane, fandom: the mentalist, fic: oneshot, project: holiday fics, pairing: jane/lisbon, character: patrick jane

Comments 2

little_firestar January 29 2012, 19:19:05 UTC

oh my. so, so sad, but happy as well, full of potential for future, but yet of ramifications of past events... glad that you shared it with us... and your first person narrated isn't bad at all.

tromana February 3 2012, 21:34:23 UTC

It's not the first person narrative I hated of this one; it's the characterisation. It felt.... wrong somehow. I guess it's mostly because this is set so far in the future that we don't know what way Jane'll go. Thanks anyway. :-)