For a Pessimist I'm Pretty Optimistic (2/2)

[not_a_zatarc]

Title: For a Pessimist I’m Pretty Optimistic
Summary: A simple trip into town goes wrong when Jack and Sam are held hostage inside a bank in Minnesota.
Timeframe: You decide. ;)
Characters/Pairing: Established SJ, Daniel, Teal’c
Genre: Drama, Action/Adventure
Rating: T (mild violence/language)
Note: Written as a Secret Santa gift for annerbhp over at sj_everyday.

Comments

[artaxastra]

This is wonderful! What a great story! Wow! You have them down beautifully!

[not_a_zatarc]

Thank you very much. :)

[midwifeonboard]

Loved it. It was just the right length IMO. Nicely done. :)

[not_a_zatarc]

Thanks! :)

[vickysg1]

Great story! I loved it! And if you had dragged this out into a much longer story, I wouldn't have minded it! :D

“The United States Air Force.”
Hehe! At least, they know they were screwed from the beginning!

[not_a_zatarc]

lol. :) Thanks, I'm glad you liked it.

[thothmes]

Action, drama, deadly peril, a bunny mask! This fic had it all.

Damn, I go out of town for a little while and you bust forth with a cornucopia of new fiction! You trying to make up for a bit of silence all at one go?

I liked the way that we got to see them using what they had and working their opportunities, knowing when to push and when to lay low until they could catch the right breaks and make it work. Very much the heads-up officers we know and love. A ripping good yarn, as they say!

[not_a_zatarc]

lol. Well I guess my muse was on overdrive and got me to finish a bunch of WIPs at once. :) Glad you liked it.

[annerbhp]

Oh, yay! I FINALLY finished my own fic and now I get to reap the rewards of getting to read this fabulous fic! This is exactly what I was looking for. I can just imagine Daniel and Teal'c. They're like, "geez guys, we can't even send you two to the store for milk without Jack getting shot." Lol.

Thank you so much for writing this for me. It's the perfect gift of Sam and Jack loveliness. :D

[not_a_zatarc]

I'm so glad you liked it. :) I had a fun time writing this one; it was a challenge for more. :D Thanks for giving me some good prompts! XD