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not_a_zatarc in notaboutthefish

Little Rascals part 3

Jun 07, 2010 11:02

Title: Little Rascals
Summary: Jack and Daniel have been turned into little kids and they’re driving Sam (and everyone else) crazy!
Timeframe: Slight AU, Season Three-ish.
Characters/Pairing: Established Sam/Jack and Janet/Daniel.
Genre: Humor, kidfic, AU, Drama, Hurt/Comfort
Rating: PG.

Note: Just warning you guys that this story isn't going to ( Read more... )

au, kidfic, drama, prompt!fic, samjack, kid!daniel, humor, danieljanet, established relationship, kid!jack, hurt/comfort

Comments 7

regularamanda June 7 2010, 16:13:59 UTC

ANGGGGSSSTTT!!!! Awww poor little!Jack and Sam :(

Just as long as she was Mrs. O’Neill at home.

Ohhh I can so see her saying this! ;) In this story and in the normal timeline as well, woo! :D

not_a_zatarc June 7 2010, 18:24:55 UTC

:) :) :)

alternaterocker June 7 2010, 16:55:57 UTC

Nooo Sam and mini!Jack are always so heartbreaking even when they're not at the same kind of age.

Daniel and Janet are awesome too, loving Janet's blush.

Only one more chapter :O? Really liked this and can't wait to see how you finish it ;)

not_a_zatarc June 7 2010, 18:25:50 UTC

:) Heh, yeah. Only one more to go. I could have dragged this one out with more fun kid stuff in between, but... *shrugs*

alternaterocker June 7 2010, 18:34:11 UTC

I think it works really well as it is because the readers don't get bored with numerous [possibly pointless] chapters of just fun and games, you make it shorter and it makes different emotions come out a lot instead of just giggling. :)

not_a_zatarc June 7 2010, 19:04:07 UTC

Well, thanks! :)

elle11elle June 8 2010, 01:30:32 UTC

Aww. It's horrible when your little sibling or kid is sick. You just want be able to make them better, but sometimes you have to sit by. Hope to see more soon !!!!!