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not_a_zatarc in notaboutthefish

Five Times Sam Saw Jack Shirtless

Jun 24, 2009 18:01

Been workin' on this fic on and off for a couple weeks, and FINALLY managed to get the last part finished! :D My first "Five Things" fic ( Read more... )

team, kidfic, five things, samjack, friendship, humor, romance, ust to rst, kid!jack, general, hurt/comfort, jacob carter

Comments 34

moonlightstorm June 24 2009, 22:36:20 UTC

This was so great! You hit their dynamic really well, I loved it.

not_a_zatarc June 25 2009, 01:12:59 UTC

Thank you very much! :D Glad you enjoyed it.

revdorothyl June 24 2009, 23:24:40 UTC

Awww...! These were delightful, and particularly the third and fifth.

Are you by any chance inspired to tell more of the story of 5-year-old O'Neill staying with Sam? That was fraught with possibilities for cuteness (no inappropriate behavior with minors implied).

not_a_zatarc June 25 2009, 01:16:03 UTC

Thanks. Glad you enjoyed! :D I think there could possibly be a ficlet or two that tells a little more story with little Jack, and Sam taking care of him. XD I can't resist. There was more I would have liked to add, but it would've strayed too far from the 'five things.'

revdorothyl June 25 2009, 18:31:48 UTC

That's encouraging news to hear! Thanks!

wanderingsmith June 25 2009, 00:37:57 UTC

awww! :D found a muse?

jack with no idea why his chest is fascinating:D silly man
jack *knowing*.. sexyyyyy
mini-jack: gawwwwww. I *just* cuddled up to a nice fuzzy mini-Si scene, lol
poor drunk jack, just wants cuddles and can't get a break..
LOVE dad. absolutely perfect scene setup. and love sam keeping him in his place and being so comfortable with the whole thing. felt very.. settled somehow

not_a_zatarc June 25 2009, 01:25:15 UTC

Glad you liked it! :D

jack with no idea why his chest is fascinating:D silly man
jack *knowing*.. sexyyyyy

Yep to both. *smirks* XD

mini-jack: gawwwwww. I *just* cuddled up to a nice fuzzy mini-Si scene, lol

lol! :)

kwiknkleen June 25 2009, 00:40:00 UTC

Those were wonderful. I really loved the one with little Jack. Shows how good she would be with a real little Jack.
And loved the last one, especially Sam's "Deal with it" to her father.
Great job!

not_a_zatarc June 25 2009, 01:26:34 UTC

:D Hehe. Gotta love itty-bitty Jack and Sam sticking up to her father. I love Jake! :D lol. Thanks for reading!

sharp2799 June 25 2009, 00:53:39 UTC

This was fun! And yummy visions of half-naked Jack swam around in my head so thanks for that too!

not_a_zatarc June 25 2009, 01:27:11 UTC

lol! :D Glad you liked it!