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Oct 20, 2008 16:34



Title: Passing Years
Chapter: 2 - “Farewell & Adieu”

Pairing: Pre-COTBP Norribeth. And teensy bits of WE here and there.
Rating: PG13 at the most.
Disclaimer: I’m just a worthless fish, swimming in the sea, but the (screen)writer of Pirates? I do wish that was me. (Alas, it is not.)
Word Count: 2,310
Summary: Four-part pre-COTBP series of James & ( Read more... )

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artic_fox October 20 2008, 06:50:11 UTC
Once again, another great chapter.

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not_nahrrington October 20 2008, 07:39:18 UTC
Whoa, that was fast. :D

And thankyou!

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ikeepfishinmytv October 20 2008, 09:52:15 UTC
*cheers* Yay!!!! We love Teeny!Elizabeth and Sarky!James, they are very cute:D And funny:D
Peace out,
Sharley

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not_nahrrington October 20 2008, 12:19:43 UTC
James is ALWAYS cute, m'dear. ;D

Except of course when he's being manly.

Perhaps manly and cute?

*goes off to ponder*

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june7rose October 21 2008, 06:00:09 UTC

The combination of Elizabeth's puppy love, so confusing to a 15 year old, and James being responsible and holding back what he's actually feeling is very well done. And very close to canon. He was quiet and responsible until it was too late and she always followed her heart and her emotions wherever they may lead. What am I saying, you've seen the movie too. :) Love the below part, may tape it on my wall or something. Okay, I'm not quite that bad.

Sincerely

Regards

Yours

From Oh. Sod it. As you say, piffle propriety. Only you will read this letter.

Love,

James.

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not_nahrrington October 22 2008, 05:02:36 UTC
*blushes* Thanks muchly for the flattery! I have trouble responding to it without sounding like I'm insane, so if I do, please ignore it. ;D

And I'm sure we all love to print off our favourite fic moments and stick 'em to our walls.

Well, I do. *grin*

Once again, thankyou! :)

*is insane*

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saime_joxxers October 22 2008, 17:18:28 UTC
EEEE. It's so CUTE!

I love your characterizations. They're really awesome. And the letters back and forth are really fun to read. It's nice to see that they're keeping their friendship even though they're zillions of miles away. I love the insights you give into both their lives, andyeah. <3

Verreh nice.

And James is such a gentleman to keep records of his shameful drunkenness just so Elizabeth can giggle at them. <3

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not_nahrrington October 23 2008, 08:50:13 UTC
Aww *heh* Once again your words - and icon - have thrown all my skills of coherent communication out the window. *grin*

(Everyone loves a drunken James Norrington.)

Oh, also: thanks! x)

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sword01 October 23 2008, 01:01:55 UTC
I really like this! The lump of dirt Lizzy sent James was priceless. And, the fact that he kept it on a saucer was even better. But, like most, I giggled at James's indicision about how to end his letter. Can't wait for the next chapter. So hurry it up, will ya? :)

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not_nahrrington October 23 2008, 08:57:12 UTC
Ahahahah. :P Now I'll write niiiiice and slooooow, just for you. ;)

No but, in all seriousness, yes - I will try to finish ch3 faster than I did this one. Mainly because I've fished out (and/or utilised) my, ahem, other muses. :D

Thankyou for the liking of the story. I is happy you is of liking it. You is make me gringrin. :)

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