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Torchwood fic: 'Wants' Jack/Ianto NC-17

Oct 26, 2009 07:06

Title: Wants
Fandom: Torchwood
Pairing: Jack/Ianto
Warnings: Spanking, D/S, Toys, Rimming
Rating: NC-17, 7,600 words
A/N: This is the followup to parts 1&2 on the TouchYerWood kink meme. Jack trains Ianto to be his begging bottom submissive. Post-Cyberwoman.
1st part - First Punishment
2nd part - Second Error
3rd part - Needs

( You've got to trust me, if you want this to happen. )

d/s, jack/ianto

Comments 56

hab318princess October 28 2009, 22:22:48 UTC

I'm not very eloquent in comments, but wanted to say that this is great chapter in a really enjoyable and deep series

not_actual_size October 29 2009, 11:32:42 UTC

Thank you! That's a super comment. Appreciate it very much. :)

silvercat63 October 29 2009, 01:53:34 UTC

Dang, I wish I'd read this earlier! Curse school lol. So anyway, time to go all fangirl here...

Ianto said yes! He actually wants it! Yay!!!! Sorry, I think some other people have said how everyone casts Ianto as the innocent "I've never done this before and you're just doing it to me" and not the "I want this, do this to me." I also like his panic attack, very good. And you can't blame him for it, I'd flip out too if I thought someone - anyone - saw me in that erm, compromising situation!

There's going to be more? Please, oh wonderfully kinky writer? And add a collar maybe, when Ianto goes back to work? One of those "Jack is smirking because he knows what's under that perfect suit?"

not_actual_size October 29 2009, 11:57:26 UTC

Oh yeah, he wants it. Jack knew he would.

I'd flip out too, I think! It's one thing to think in theory that something is exciting, until it might happen, then...not so much!

There will be more. I think "jewelry" will play a part. Thank you!

verasteine October 29 2009, 12:00:38 UTC

Woot! I love this series. I want more. Seriously, this is some of the best pron in this fandom so far!

not_actual_size October 31 2009, 08:00:21 UTC

Wow, I don't know about that! But thank you for that!

tiggerbrasilf October 30 2009, 20:41:05 UTC

You are stopping it there? Hmm I wonder if I can go jump my other half...

not_actual_size October 31 2009, 08:01:00 UTC

LOL! Thank you much!

mcparrot November 1 2009, 12:27:30 UTC

Oh thank you, I don't know why, but Ianto's freak out and Jack's response, when we see the characters completely honest with each other, and back in their normal characters, made this whole scenario alright. Yes, now, this is totally consenting, because yes now, Jack has said that he needs it too. Before he was very creepy.
VERY creepy.
And yet I kept reading.
As someone else said, I haven't seen you around the fandom before, but I'm glad you're here now.
And isn't it interesting to see all the familiar avatars come out from the anonomous meme.

not_actual_size November 1 2009, 15:01:29 UTC

It is!

I know...I started with the pornographic bit because of the kinkmeme, so there wasn't as much room for exposition. Working backwards!

Thanks very much for giving this a chance as it goes on.