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Can't Stand It - v69

Mar 18, 2012 20:40

Title: Can’t Stand It - Vignettes

Rating: NC-17 for the whole story

Genre: au

Summary: Jack drives to Wyoming when he hears about Ennis’ divorce. He does not react well to Ennis sending him away.

Warnings: Angst, bad grammar, typos.....no death and I like happily ever after.

Disclaimer: I borrowed these characters and I make no money from this.

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Comments 33

sjmarv March 19 2012, 02:58:53 UTC

Just love this story. Sorry I didn't comment on chapters posted this past fall/winter. I got caught up when you mentioned you had some new chapters coming up soon.

You always manage to make each character quite fleshed out and believable, but all full of surprises, growing and maturing, like Alma's to offer to Bobby. The humorous banter and sexual playfulness between Ennis and Jack is another of my favorite aspects of CSI (the comments about sleeping with another Peterson and the tie were just great

Susan

nosunlight March 19 2012, 03:10:01 UTC

Thanks....I’m glad that you are still enjoying my little story.

Thank you joetheone March 19 2012, 03:10:10 UTC

Thank you for the update. I look forward to them so much and enjoy the family gatherings. I really liked the graduation and the conversation with Alma and Bobby. As for New York one thing I would suggest is starting out at Battery Park and walking all the way to Central Park. I did this when I was 13 with my Uncle he wanted to teach me something and he did and I have done it with several others over the years. On this walk it never fails you are usually lucky enough to see people from every walk in life. From the richest, to the poorest to the Hookers,pushers and every nationality that you can find. I have also never been disappointed in seeing at least 2 celebrities on this walk. The architecture the wonders of the city and the little cafe's to the fabulous stores and the beauty of nature peeking out in the strangest of places. It is a walk I will never ever forget and One that I think nobody will ever forget. It would probably be a big wake up call for Ennis and everyone. I could describe it to you in detail but I ( ... )

Re: Thank you nosunlight March 19 2012, 03:18:53 UTC

Thanks for reading. I already wrote their trip...no battery park, sorry. Hopefully, I make it up to you with all that they do instead.

My goodness! gentleposter March 19 2012, 05:01:01 UTC

What a nice surprise. It has been ages since we have heard from you and I have missed my favorite story. 8) Looking forward to the long long update. New York, huh? Should be interesting.

Susan

Re: My goodness! nosunlight March 19 2012, 05:13:41 UTC

I’m back...well, until work and life smacks me in the head again...

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nosunlight July 10 2012, 06:14:54 UTC

V69 cwby30 March 19 2012, 06:41:50 UTC

Evenin', karen.

Well, nice to have another installment. And I'm glad that Jack and Bobby went to the graduation with Ennis and the rest of the family. They are all a blended family and they aren't going away... except on vacation to New York! Great city! I too have walked and ridden a bicycle from the Battery to Central Park. J&E and the kids could stay a month and still just scratch the surface of all the sights. Hope they make it to the UN Building which would definitely broaden their horizons even more, and to the top of the Empire State Building for the view.

I like how you pull in these surprise facts of their lives, like the ugly tie and the uglier table. And how Ennis is relaxing more into his life with Jack, and didn't run and hide when Junior made her remark about being gay and having bad taste! And the time and trust that Monroe gave to Amanda. And Alma with Bobby.

Looking forward to more... as always.

Thanks again.

Bud

Re: V69 nosunlight July 10 2012, 06:15:29 UTC

Thank you.