[fic] Mislaid

[noscrubs12345]

Title: Mislaid
Author: noscrubs12345
Rating: R
Word Count: ~2560
Summary: And what you thought you lost was just mislaid....
Warnings: Angst, infidelity, character death, sexual situations.
Prompt: Libra (Sept. 23 -- Oct. 23): You may be waiting for something or someone. And the whole process has left you frustrated and anxious. But if you get a quarter of

Comments

[brighty18]

As heartbreaking and difficult as this was, it was very, very well-written. Yes, now I can finally say that in public!

You capture the very real and very painful feelings so well and I could totally relate to both of them. But the use of second person was daring and brilliantly executed. A really nice, refreshing view of this whole, sordid mess.

Very moving!

[noscrubs12345]

Thank you! :)

I wasn't quite sure about the POV for the games, but I couldn't have seen it any other way.

[oddsbobs]

Ouch (but in a good way).

Wonderful!

[oddsbobs]

oh, and I agree with brighty about the use of second person. :)

[noscrubs12345]

I loved the POV for this one--I wasn't sure about it, but it just felt like it fit the plot bunny. ^_^

[noscrubs12345]

Thank you! ♥