Kiss

[northsealily]

Kiss

Short one shot written for LoveFest. Canon, rating **. Tent sex. Sorry, no kinks. Appx. 700 words.

Ennis and Jack are Annie Proulx's characters. This is the first time I've written fiction since I was 10.

I’m almost awake. I feel like I did sometimes when I was eight years old, it’s nice and warm. I hear something; momma is putting more wood

Comments

[uli1]

Hey, do I know you? ;)

How great to see you writing!

Especially such a sweet sweet mix of SNIT shyness and a little bit of FNIT "passion rush" (LOL, couldn't think of a better word...)

It’s still almost dark but I can see one nipple. It looks sleepy, not like last night when it was pointy and I touched it with the tip of my tongue. Very quickly, hoping he wouldn’t notice, because it felt strange to want to do that.

This - well, actually the whole thing - was just lovely!!

I hope you will keep on writing!!

Um, in case I don't know you - just ignore me! Hm, no, don't ignore me! Because that wouldn't change anything of what I have written in this wonderful "this comment sucks as much as usual" comment of mine...

Thanks for sharing

Uli!

[northsealily]

Heehee! No, you have no idea who I am. LOL Just kidding. Shhhhhhhh! ;D

Thank you, Uli!

*flashes MIB flashy thing so Uli will forget she read this*

Hugs!

[northsealily]

Thank you! That was just what I tried to do.

I like your userpic!

[jacks_key]

That was beautiful! I think you got Ennis' confusion and desire just right. Great job. :)

[northsealily]

Thank you!

[samtyr]

Shy, confused and still-so-innocent Ennis is just so sexy! I wish he could see that all Jack really wants is him.

[northsealily]

I'm glad you found him sexy.

I wish the same. *sigh*

[camillar]

This was so beautiful! I am a sucker for canon, so I really loved this! Thanks so much!
Camilla

[northsealily]

Thank you! It's nice to see that people still read canon.