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northface11

Troubled Waters, Part 1

Jun 11, 2006 18:46

Title: Troubled Waters

Rating: PG, Gen

Summary: In northwestern Washington, Sam and Dean run into a cult, missing people, plagues, some really humid weather, and possessed trees.

Disclaimer: As usual, I don’t own anything. The geography in this story is fairly accurate; everything else is fiction. Oh, and apologies to William Butler Yeats.

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Comments 16

big_pink June 12 2006, 02:09:13 UTC

I'm so jealous. Look at your first post, with everything freakin' perfect. Sigh. In my dreams.
Shuffles off to sniffle in the corner.

northface11 June 12 2006, 02:38:40 UTC

I think it's a fluke; beginner's luck. Next time around, it'll be a disaster. And in reply to something you said yesterday--northface and north-face were unavailable, unfortunately. Northface is somebody in Chicago... no mountains there that I'm aware of. So, went for 11, having been born in November rather than 1911.

Is there a way to keep it from putting like three spaces between paragraphs when you cut and paste from Word? I guess it's not really a problem, but it seems wasteful.

iamzulma June 12 2006, 03:44:14 UTC

Hi!

I'm curious where this is going to go. You've got a knack for dialogue, good job there! Do keep writing this series! :)

northface11 June 12 2006, 04:34:10 UTC

Knack for dialogue? Thank you... I think it's the hardest part to write! Glad you're curious about where it's going... it's pretty much written already, just doing all the editting, which is such a pain but, you know, kind of important.

iamzulma June 12 2006, 15:27:11 UTC

Oh, dialogue is definitely tricky, I could never do it! That's my weakest point of all, but you pulled it off!

anonymous June 12 2006, 12:41:33 UTC

Good story so far.I love the Dean/Sam banter.Update soon.

northface11 June 12 2006, 15:27:12 UTC

Thanks! The next chapter will be up in a day or two.

vaznetti June 12 2006, 12:54:33 UTC

Very nice start -- I like the interaction between Dean and Sam here (and I loved the telephone call! hysterical!), and the opening definitely got me interested in Jasper Kelman.

I'll keep an eye out for therest of this.

northface11 June 12 2006, 15:36:38 UTC

Thanks. It was fun making up Kelman and Mrs Edwards, even if I wouldn't actually like to meet either one of them!

desertport June 12 2006, 13:52:41 UTC

Really enjoyed this! I like your Sam and Dean (why three egg rolls, indeed?), and the dialogue was very nice, and I do want to continue reading. Looking forward to more!

northface11 June 12 2006, 15:47:51 UTC

Thank you very much. I'm partial to good dialogue, too, but it's so hard to write, so I spend a lot of time on it. Not too sure about the egg rolls...