Fill: "Hunted" 4/?psychoshinjiJuly 18 2011, 21:17:56 UTC
He scrabbled to his hands and knees, clawing at the soil. Thor was never one to end a hunt so quickly. He enjoyed the chase. Loki sought to use this to his advantage, knowing full well that his brother may let him escape for the challenge of it all
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OP WANTS TO LAY FLOWERS AT YOUR FEETneuroticismetteJuly 19 2011, 11:01:21 UTC
My love, I have no words T_T
I never expected this direction but I love it so much. And the way you fleshed it out! An anon commenter above said it perfectly - your writing is impeccable.
I lovelovelove the way you wrote Loki and that scene. NGH. IDEK I MEAN I WAS TERRIFIED FOR LOKI AND YET I COULDN'T LOOK AWAY IT'S SO FUCKING GOD I CAN'T. And the way you ended it is just fucking amazing - Loki deadbeat, wrapped in his brother's cloak and that kiss. :3
Thank you so much for taking this one. I absolutely adore everything. Your work is splendid. And if I may -- because I saw a comment of yours above wherein you mentioned you were more used to illustrating than writing? -- if it ever crosses your fancy to draw some of the scenes here, pleasepleaseplease do! <3
You have won the internet, my love and my grandchildren's future empires!
Re: OP WANTS TO LAY FLOWERS AT YOUR FEETpsychoshinjiJuly 19 2011, 23:18:41 UTC
<3 Thank you so much! You had an awesome idea for a prompt, and I'm really glad that you like the fill! I was really hoping that readers would feel Loki's fear and panic during the chase scene and I'm so pleased that you enjoyed it. (Hehe, I had to channel feelings from childhood games of tag and being chased around during those games to get it to feel right. I got tagged 'it' too many times for my own good that way lol
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Re: Fill: "Hunted" 8/8psychoshinjiJanuary 4 2012, 02:38:55 UTC
Hmm, I'm not sure, but I might! X3 I've written enough "Thor fucks Loki hard and it ends on an ambiguous note" fills where I've yet to explore the aftermath!
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I never expected this direction but I love it so much. And the way you fleshed it out! An anon commenter above said it perfectly - your writing is impeccable.
I lovelovelove the way you wrote Loki and that scene. NGH. IDEK I MEAN I WAS TERRIFIED FOR LOKI AND YET I COULDN'T LOOK AWAY IT'S SO FUCKING GOD I CAN'T. And the way you ended it is just fucking amazing - Loki deadbeat, wrapped in his brother's cloak and that kiss. :3
Thank you so much for taking this one. I absolutely adore everything. Your work is splendid. And if I may -- because I saw a comment of yours above wherein you mentioned you were more used to illustrating than writing? -- if it ever crosses your fancy to draw some of the scenes here, pleasepleaseplease do! <3
You have won the internet, my love and my grandchildren's future empires!
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Normally I do an anime style so I'm still adjusting to attempting to capture Chris and Tom's likenesses
You are amazing. Where the hell did you come from? I want you in my life. Cannot even okay.
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I definitely like your thoroughly ravished Loki, that was just ajlkfjfaldkfj no words!
The chase was great, the sex was hot, that was perfect.
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AWESOME fic! and I absolutely LOVE your growly and feral Thor, he's so possessive and hot which is my favorite kind of Thor!
Nicely done psychoshinji, VERY nicely done. XD
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