[Loki/Jane] Jane turns into a BAMF dragon
anonymous
July 24 2013, 05:35:37 UTC
Many of Thor’s admirers aren’t all that happy that of all the people who would claim Thor's heart, it would end up being a lowly Midgardian woman. Yet one such female admirer travels to Earth through the many hidden paths of the Yggdrassil and perform an ancient ritual for Jane to give up her humanity and turn into a dragon
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Reptilian- PrologueBartemis_dayJuly 25 2013, 09:15:47 UTC
The ancient runes light up with power, bright white that seeps into the chalk drawn lines. They reach her struggling body and enshroud her. Her screams of fear turn to pain as the magic courses through her, changing her. Her limbs elongate, bones cracking and snapping into new places. Her fingers curl into themselves and grow pointed at the ends. Her voice steadily lowers in pitch, going from girlish to impossibly deep and animalistic. She expands out of the circle. I must back away to the wall to avoid her crushing me. A tail grows between her legs, long and covered in dark purple scales that crawl up the rest of her body, until none of her human flesh remains. Her face grows outward into a snout, smoke puffing out her nostrils as her new set of bone-gnashing teeth grow in
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Re: Reptilian- PrologueBartemis_dayJuly 25 2013, 09:18:19 UTC
I just want to make it clear that only the prologue is in 1stPOV. It's meant to be what the attacker's thought process is while changing Jane. I usually use italics to signify thoughts, but I don't think I can do that in the replies. Everything from here on in will be 3rdPOV.
Reptilian- 1bartemis_dayJuly 26 2013, 07:24:41 UTC
Other members of the scientific community have weighed in, including strangely enough, billionaire, former CEO of Stark Industries and popular superhero, Tony Stark, whom we have in the studio today, speaking with our correspondent, Jackson Peterton. Jack, go ahead
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Re: Reptilian- 1bfutakuchi_onnaJuly 26 2013, 18:03:25 UTC
Oh, that was great, so funny for the most part. Tony was probably a bit drunk again. Their own fault for interviewing him. XD
And that's a clever way to give Thor an even better reason to hunt the dragon at any cost, even if it means bringing Loki to Earth again. More, please? :D
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anonymous
July 27 2013, 05:19:51 UTC
I’m thrilled that someone picked this up and even more excited after reading such a great beginning. I like the difference of perspectives here, especially how you’re able to go from dark and anger-ridden of the first piece, to the crack with underlying notes of conflict of the second piece
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Re: Reptilian- (OP here)artemis_dayJuly 27 2013, 07:34:12 UTC
I'm so glad to hear that you like it. I hope to do your prompt justice, because it's an amazing one that I simply couldn't resist writing.
Updates might be a tad slower than they've been, but I'll try my very best to get 1-2 parts posted per day. I'm working on the first part of chapter 2 now.
Re: Reptilian- 1bartemis_dayJuly 27 2013, 21:09:11 UTC
Technically, it was an accident. The person who threw it meant to hit Jane and Jane was not even trying to deflect it. Her tail just kind of moved on it's own. Everyone just thinks she did it intentionally because why wouldn't a giant monster want to kill people?
Reptilian- 2aartemis_dayJuly 27 2013, 09:50:18 UTC
The Asgardian palace is home to the most extensive library in all the nine realms. No one even has to travel them to know this. Over the many passing centuries, the All-Father has filled it to bursting with books from all over. Whenever more room is needed, a new wing is created, and this will continue until the end of time itself
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Reptilian- 2bartemis_dayJuly 28 2013, 04:15:37 UTC
He follows her as far is the history section and then dismisses her; he knows the rest of the way from here. The girl seems all too happy to leave, almost running before catching herself, stumbling over her feet as she tried to slow down. She disappears down another aisle and Loki moves on
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Also, I'd love it if either Osborn or Doom were the robbed supervillain. XD
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Just wanted to clear that up. :)
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And that's a clever way to give Thor an even better reason to hunt the dragon at any cost, even if it means bringing Loki to Earth again.
More, please? :D
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Updates might be a tad slower than they've been, but I'll try my very best to get 1-2 parts posted per day. I'm working on the first part of chapter 2 now.
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