Comments | norinori_junno: You wake suddenly...-KiChul [fanfic]

norinori_junno

You wake suddenly...-KiChul [fanfic]

Jun 24, 2007 19:28

Title: You wake suddenly...
Rating: PG-13 (?)
Genre: psychological, psychotic
Pairing: No names mentioned ever. Pick a pairing and roll with it. Originally written as a KiChul, but also works well with JunDa or other pairings.
Summary: The voice in your head. The voice that you fear. The voice that carries power, seduction, compelling you to obey…
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kichul, fanfiction, super junior

Comments 9

enchanted1312 July 5 2007, 05:36:51 UTC

that was dark and i liked how the other, kibum, managed to soothe heechul's dark mind. ^.^

norinori_junno July 5 2007, 05:54:17 UTC

Thank you very very much for commenting! I was really worried about how this piece would be perceived...

Hmmm, and I almost ended the whole thing at "But you can’t stop it.". Which would have lead to a very different story...

Thank you again for commenting! (sorry for the long reply!)

askingxwhy July 5 2007, 10:16:10 UTC

yes this was odd but in a very good and well written way.

criticism? ahh i dont wanna say anything wrong!
well this was my fave bit:
The voice whispers, hisses, frantically. But the words are lost to you as you gaze upon your lover’s face. Hoping, praying that he will wake up, open his eyes. Look into your own and see the demon within you. Hoping he will pull himself away, far far away, where he is safe.

it shows how the characters arent jsut charcters they are actual people and this is a possible way of them feeling. personaly i can see Heechul thinking this. and i guess i like it coz it kinda reminds me of myself..in a way (not that im a serial killer or anything ^^)

and pairings *hehe*:
heechul/eeteuk - if u write this pairing i will worship for ever .. and offer u hearts ♥♥
heechul/donghae;
heechul/sungmin;
heechul/kangin

sorry bout the long comment =) ♥♥♥

norinori_junno July 23 2007, 17:17:27 UTC

Oh geez, wow! Thank you for the long comment!!! *kicks LJ for being a butt and not emailing me about your response* Sorry for the late, late, late reply~

Thank you again *hugs*

askingxwhy July 23 2007, 17:26:41 UTC

np ^^ thats like the longest comment ive ever written O.O
and OMG i just noticed you icon *squeee*
i wrote a new fic series with pyscho!chullie and abused!min
would u mind reading and criticising?
its in the miracle____ community i just cant hyperlink -__-

norinori_junno July 23 2007, 20:36:58 UTC

XD

pouty face icons FTW!!!!

I feel honored that I got such a long comment~ Thank you very much!

*reading*

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norinori_junno July 23 2007, 17:18:12 UTC

Sorry for the super late response, but LJ is a butt and didn't email me...

Thank you very much for commenting!!! *hugs*

anonymous July 23 2007, 16:40:10 UTC

wow

norinori_junno July 23 2007, 17:16:02 UTC

ehhh? I wish you were logged in so I could ask:

godd wow? or bad wow?