[Fic] Caution is for fools.…

[norilys]

Pairing: Akame
Gender: Slice of Life, Romance, SMUT
Rating: NC-17
Beta: meikimari
Disclaimer: None of them belong to me yet So, so far, just the plots is mine Naty-chan’s
Warning: English is not my mother language, but I don't suck at it… Un-betaed. All opinions on Jin’s fashion sense are from my image of Kazuya and do not correspond with my own opinion on the

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~SPOT FOR NATY-CHAN~

[norilys]

isolated_killer

Sorry it took me so long to finish this and that the result is so poorly written and developed... But I promised a spot for you, ne? So here it is...

Please, enjoy~~!! And thanks a lot for providing the plot ^___^

~SPOT FOR K-CHAN~

[norilys]

meikimari

I know I promised to send it to beta with you, but in a rush for posting it, I couldn't help it... maybe you could beta for me some other time, ne~~ /bricked

Still, I clearly remembered promising something for posting Jin's ustream so quickly, right? So here it is...

Hope you can enjoy it...

Re: ~SPOT FOR K-CHAN~

[meikimari]

I'm er....uber late ne~ GOMEN!!!!...I only had time tonight to read it. 8D Well, technically, that would've been a lie...I...would've had time at school this afternoon, but that would've been awkward to read smut at school /shot...manager-san made me do that once. *coughcough*

But yeah for sure, haha, if you want me to beta it I can~ :D It wouldn't take me long~ *coughit'sdonealreadycough* just email me: kwl.lim@gmail.com~ and I'll email the doc to you~ <3

AND GAWD....hot that it is. LOL. I do love how you used all that stuff from the utream. 8D What he was wearing~ His red sneakers~ Too bad that sticker's not on it. LOL.

Re: ~SPOT FOR K-CHAN~

[norilys]

You're not late at all, sweetie!!! ♥ I hope I didn't force you to read this or anything, I just really wanted to dedicated something for you!!! ^___^

*lol* YOu already beta-ed!? O__o That's dedication...!!! OMG~~ Sorry in advance for the tragical grammar .___. I'll e-mail you then ^__^ Thanks soooooo much!!!

Weird enough, I actually wrote the part with Jin's cloth from the beginning on the morning of Nov 8th before watching the ustream #creepypsychicme So, you can imagine how I was at night, right? xDD Except for the shoes, of course... No one could have predicted the shoes xDD

Re: ~SPOT FOR K-CHAN~

[meikimari]

Hahah i would never consider it forced. The jin testdrive would've driven me to read. XD

And your english is fine! I find betaing a fic makes me pay more attention to what i'm reading so....that's how that came to be. ^^"
So don't even worry. Last night was my much needed break and then i actually had time to read and do a bit of ther things too.

LOL! Really? That's crazy! ヽ(*≧ω≦)ﾉ

~SPOT FOR WIFEY-CHAN~

[norilys]

gina84

So I need to say anything else other than I TOTALLY LOVE YOU!?

♥

Sorry for the lack of Kame in yukata for this

Re: ~SPOT FOR WIFEY-CHAN~

[moon_catcher]

The only reason why I'm going to forgive you the obvious lack of Kame in yukata is because I'm a couple of months late to read this ;__;
Which is not because I would have forgotten but because there were always other things to do or read or write and with RL around, it's hard to actually keep track with anything *pouts*

I hope it's okay to come here with a little concrit; you've already read most of it before when I wrote you the msg some time ago; only this fic kind of reminded me of it so I'm pointing it out
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This might be the longest pwp I've ever read/seen. But of course, trust Nori to turn such a simple and shamelessly pervy plot (?) into something like this.
The atmospehere is sizzling all the way and yay for their little ride and then the other ride as well /shotJust... well, actually, this is one of the things I mentioned in the msg I wrote you during the Author-feedback meme all the time back then

Re: ~SPOT FOR WIFEY-CHAN~

[norilys]

I thought it was because of the litle drabble with Kame in white shirt that granted me your forgiveness, but either way it's fine /bricked

The concrit will always be appreciated, and actually I'm always looking forward some croncit with every fic I post. So please, feel free to do it anytime you want to... Especially since you're not only my lovely Wifey-chan, but also one of my favorite authors out there...

Just so you know the first PWP I wrote was actually longer than this one. It's devided in three parts, developed in Harry Potter Universe and written in Spanish, so maybe that means I've improved (?) /bricked Now, the lenght of the PWP is something I should improve even more or are you actually saying it was something good? I mean, I want to understand it so I can get better at writin p0rn /shot

Re: ~SPOT FOR WIFEY-CHAN~

[moon_catcher]

one can never apologize enough for a lack of Kame in yukata /shot

Well, I don't think that the lenght is something that determines the quality of pwp here I feel a weird urge to make a note that Brian Kinney would surely have a remark about leght and the quality of porn /shot /don't mind me, it's past 1 AM and I should be already sleeping .-.

O____o I'm not sure I'm the right one to give advices about writing porn DD:
But of course, if you decide that I am, we can discuss stuff ♥ #howcouldisayno

*pouts* Actually, as easy as it may look, to please me, the truth is right the opposite :p You just know the right ways xDD
I'm quite demanding and hard to please, especially when it comes to Kazuya! *____*

;___; sorry, I probably sound like an illiterate idiot, complaining about less common vocabulary /bricked

[wintersdancer]

♥

I clearly suck at comments, especially in the morning .-.

[norilys]

Don't worry cuz I totally feel like I sucked at this one /bricked

♥

[jin_no_shitsuji]

My spot! Will be back to read ♥

[norilys]

Don't worry, this fic won't move anywhere ^___^