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kirin_saga August 1 2008, 05:52:36 UTC
*stares* How dare you leave it there?! How dare you?!
But, seriously though, I love this! I'm glad the trap caught one of us!

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norielit August 1 2008, 05:56:34 UTC
*is indignant* What, I'm not allowed to do a cliff-hanger for once in my life?

Honestly, I wanted the reader to choose what they decided. Because both options have their strong points and low points.

*train of thought screechs to a halt as a bunny appears*

...All I'm going to say is this: Springer. Perceptor. The Lady Or The Tiger?

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kirin_saga August 1 2008, 06:10:48 UTC
*is indignant* What, I'm not allowed to do a cliff-hanger for once in my life?

Everyone is entitled to how ever many cliff-hangers they want. *nods*

Honestly, I wanted the reader to choose what they decided. Because both options have their strong points and low points.

I figured that's what you meant. I, myself, don't know which I'd rather they pick. Maybe they don't even know and just flipped a coin.

*train of thought screechs to a halt as a bunny appears*

...All I'm going to say is this: Springer. Perceptor. The Lady Or The Tiger?

*stares in confusion* *looks up The Lady or the Tiger* *falls in love with story* Yes... Such a wonderful bunny!

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norielit August 1 2008, 06:17:29 UTC
I figured that's what you meant. I, myself, don't know which I'd rather they pick. Maybe they don't even know and just flipped a coin.

...Basically my response as well.

*stares in confusion* *looks up The Lady or the Tiger* *falls in love with story* Yes... Such a wonderful bunny!

*is horrified* You've never read it?! Go get it! Now! Go to the library and read it - it won't even take you an hour! Everyone should read The Lady or the Tiger.

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alabaster_demon August 1 2008, 06:08:38 UTC
Ohhh, cliffhanger... I personally think they would choose to transfer. Because if Red Alert told Optimus that they'd decided to stay on the Ark, I have a feeling he would be thinking "...Why?!? If I had the chance I'd get as far away from these crazy mechs as possible!"

Oh, and did you know that your "Location: Stealing cookies from Starscream. Might die soon." links to GoogleMap directions from the location 'Starscream. Might die soon.' to the location 'Stealing cookies'? LAWL. and the poor program actually tried to come up with a 'Did you mean...' list.

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norielit August 1 2008, 06:15:16 UTC
Hmm... Yes, but it wouldn't really be healthy for Inferno, now would it? And it would kinda be backing away from a challange for Red, and he might even see it as 'betraying' his commander (even though he wouldn't be).

*stares at the google map* No, I didn't realize that. ...The poor, poor thing. Think I overloaded it's logic circuits?

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yami_samuraiflo August 1 2008, 17:19:18 UTC
*stare*
It was... perfect. No matter their choice, it will not be easy for Red Alert and Inferno.
Thinking about the Wreckers... Just how many times did they try to recruit a security mech? And what happened to those poor unfortunate souls/sparks if they had to spend time with the whole team?
I hope you'll fall into 'traps' like that more often. *grin*

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norielit August 2 2008, 01:28:17 UTC
I'm glad you enjoyed it!

No, it won't be easy. And I just realized, after rereading it, that I kinda missed the point of the original bunny - that people don't make Red's life easy, even though he saves their lives with his paranoia a lot. But that's kinda been done before, so I don't feel too bad.

How many times did they try to recruit someone? ...Good question. My guess? A bazillion (and two). No, honestly, I'm guessing they probably didn't actually try very many - after all, Springer would realize that most people can't handle being in an outfit like the Wreckers. Part of the reason he was so willing to take Perceptor's word for it was the fact that Red Alert was from the Ark, which, while not having as many gung-ho types as the Wreckers, still has quite a few not-entirely-sane mechs, so Red would know how to handle it.

Honestly? I don't mind traps like this. Matter of fact, I think I'm going to go see what traps have been laid today... *grins and hugs*

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dreamer_way August 2 2008, 21:48:51 UTC
Agur, you just killed me with that cliffhanger of your's XD It was such a good story, that I wanted to keep on reading it more and more. It was such a good story ^_^ Keep it up

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norielit August 3 2008, 00:58:03 UTC
O_O If I killed you, do I have to revive you? 'Cause I don't know anything about necromancy...I'm glad you enjoyed it!

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