So yay i was first!!!!!!!!!!!!! ok im done now. And now to your story: My favorite part:
“I hate your fucking guts.”
“Thanks hyung~! I owe you one!” Kyuhyun sniggered as he watched Yesung trudge down the hall way wearing a janitor’s outfit and pushing a cart.
“You owe me so much that you’re not going to be able to pay it all back even after you die. And since you died in debt you’re going to reborn as a fucking cricket.”
lmaoooooo this was soo funny. I want to have a Kyuhyun cricket! I can already see yesung's face. And Kyu! you have to love him for coming up with that plan and then making someone else do it.
I'm glad Minnie found the note. Even though Eunhyuk isn't letting him go.
This does have a happy ending I assume. I mean it has to have one this is Kyumin and Kyumin is <3!
But, anyway, nice chapter and it was not short. Can't wait for the ending.
See, i wasn't kidding when i said i was going to stalk your livejournal.
SO, when do we get the ending?
Love you for your chapters and for writing Kyumin.
Lol, I always like having amusement in my fanfics, when things are too serious, I just don't find myself attracted to it anymore, so I try to add some humor of my own. ^^ And when Yesung is in the story, I can never see him as 100% serious.(x
Yup. I can't handle sad endings.(x Lol.(x
I'm thinking that I'm going to split up the next chapter since it'll probably be too long. And I myself usually start to loose interest when the fan fics are an incredibly long chapter, unless they're good.(: I have a lot of tests coming up tomorrow, and a lot of work to catch up on. So I'm hoping to have it up the day after tomorrow.(:
Good luck on all that. Ohh you should come visit me on my livejournal page. I write too, but I use this to comment on people's things. I don't know why. lol but yeah come visit me. I'm static-abyss in livejournal
OH! So, Hyukkie does like minnie... as in FOR REAL... i thought he just did those things FOR sungmin out of concern for him, as a best friend.... hmmm... still, i can't hate hyukkie, he does love minnie and he saw how kyu treated minnie so maybe he thought minnie was better off with him... i just hope he doesnt hurt minnie physically or something... or worse, rape him!!! (hahaha... sorry, can't keep my wild imagination under control)
and kudos to minnie... for his unwavering love for idiot kyu... he's simply adorable here... * pinch pinch* which leads me back to one of the things that was bugging me since the first chapter... if kyu really did/does love min, why did he have to be so cold to him? and why in those 2 long years didnt he say so??? and what is with kyu that min loves him so, so much despite kyu being so cold to him?
waiting for the grand ending!!! kekeke... hwaiting!
awwww poor Kyu =( You better make it Minnie >.< I feel bad for Hyukkie too, but he seriously needs to BACK OFF bcuz Hyukmin is cute but Kyumin is ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥ & janitor!Yesung had me laughing my ass off XD
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ok im done now.
And now to your story: My favorite part:
“I hate your fucking guts.”
“Thanks hyung~! I owe you one!” Kyuhyun sniggered as he watched Yesung trudge
down the hall way wearing a janitor’s outfit and pushing a cart.
“You owe me so much that you’re not going to be able to pay it all back even after you
die. And since you died in debt you’re going to reborn as a fucking cricket.”
lmaoooooo this was soo funny. I want to have a Kyuhyun cricket! I can already see yesung's face. And Kyu! you have to love him for coming up with that plan and then making someone else do it.
I'm glad Minnie found the note. Even though Eunhyuk isn't letting him go.
This does have a happy ending I assume. I mean it has to have one this is Kyumin and Kyumin is <3!
But, anyway, nice chapter and it was not short. Can't wait for the ending.
See, i wasn't kidding when i said i was going to stalk your livejournal.
SO, when do we get the ending?
Love you for your chapters and for writing Kyumin.
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And when Yesung is in the story, I can never see him as 100% serious.(x
Yup. I can't handle sad endings.(x
Lol.(x
I'm thinking that I'm going to split up the next chapter since it'll probably be too long. And I myself usually start to loose interest when the fan fics are an incredibly long chapter, unless they're good.(:
I have a lot of tests coming up tomorrow, and a lot of work to catch up on. So I'm hoping to have it up the day after tomorrow.(:
I love you for reading~!(:
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i thought he just did those things FOR sungmin out of concern for him, as a best friend....
hmmm... still, i can't hate hyukkie, he does love minnie and he saw how kyu treated minnie so maybe he thought minnie was better off with him...
i just hope he doesnt hurt minnie physically or something... or worse, rape him!!! (hahaha... sorry, can't keep my wild imagination under control)
and kudos to minnie... for his unwavering love for idiot kyu... he's simply adorable here... * pinch pinch*
which leads me back to one of the things that was bugging me since the first chapter... if kyu really did/does love min, why did he have to be so cold to him? and why in those 2 long years didnt he say so??? and what is with kyu that min loves him so, so much despite kyu being so cold to him?
waiting for the grand ending!!! kekeke...
hwaiting!
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Agreed, I was thinking about having him do .... yeah to Minnie, but I don't think I would have been able to write it.(x
Hm. I'll try to explain it in the next chapter, so I hope it'll clear up for you~!(:
I hope you won't be too disappointed.
Thanks for reading~!(:
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Sad cry third spot save.
Now brb.
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SHOULD I REPEAT MY COMMENT FROM BEFORE?
LAID.
Btw, I really, really like Janitor!Yesung.
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For some reason, out of all the members of Super Junior, to me, only Yesung could pull that part off.(x
Thanks for reading~!(:
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I really hope that Minnie makes it to the competition
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You better make it Minnie >.<
I feel bad for Hyukkie too, but he seriously needs to BACK OFF
bcuz Hyukmin is cute but Kyumin is ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥
& janitor!Yesung had me laughing my ass off XD
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