His Bed 3

Jun 10, 2007 21:42

Dr. Cox was long gone by the time JD finally entered the bathroom. He stripped off the very masculine pink bathrobe he'd donned in the other man's absence and turned on the water. It was lucky that he'd fallen asleep early the night before; it may have been even more awkward if he was awake when Dr. Cox took over his bed. Or, even worse, he would ( Read more... )

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pavonine June 13 2007, 02:34:29 UTC
"Something's in the water at the Scrubs fandom to keep me involved like this."

IAWTC

JD asking all of those questions, like "You think I'm attractive?" and "Can I really touch you in private?"? SO GREAT. Honestly, you have nothing to worry about when it comes to keeping characters IC. Dr. Cox is perfectly ranty, JD is perfectly rambly (and I loved him as the Dictionary Thief; I could imagine the cutaway scene), and this was just fun to read.

And I got first comment on all. Me FTW.

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non_timeo June 13 2007, 03:00:23 UTC
Hee! Thank you so much! XD I just went and fixed all the spelling errors/typos you pointed out in the other chapters - the "give give" one made me laugh out loud.

Ahhh, Dictionary Thief; my Scrubs fic joke ideas seem to come when it's too early or too late to think straight.

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severedscythe June 13 2007, 02:56:28 UTC
oh MY. This makes me ever so pleased, yes it does. I love how you've managed to get their characterizations down so perfectly and make it effortlessly humorous. XD well done! One of my favourites.

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andsoshewrites July 5 2007, 23:39:18 UTC
guess what?

This was amazingly squee-full and in character.

<33

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kleimo91 January 27 2008, 14:32:35 UTC
So little comments????
This is just GREAT! AWESOME! WHEHUU! Whatever!
*________*
Waaaaaaaaaah.... *squeek*

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