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tielan in non_mcsmooch

fic: Rituals [John/Teyla]

Jan 17, 2010 18:18

TITLE: Rituals
AUTHOR: Tielan
SUMMARY: Like any good two year old, Torran knows how to procrastinate when it comes to bedtime.
RATING: PG-13
CATEGORY: humour, romance
WORD COUNT: ~1,000
DISCLAIMER: Stargate Atlantis characters belong to MGM, Sci-Fi, Gekko, and a lot of companies that make money out of them. I'd love to be making money out of them ( Read more... )

john/teyla

Comments 27

beth_soprano January 17 2010, 07:33:00 UTC

I love this! It's adorable and perfect and Teyla is, of course, the best mom ever.

tielan January 17 2010, 19:37:34 UTC

Thank you! :)

gaffsie January 17 2010, 08:34:23 UTC

This was adorable. I love that Torren is such a kid in this. He's not acting all wise and precocious like so many fanfic-kids do.

tielan January 17 2010, 19:39:53 UTC

Thank you! I rather like writing Torran as a kid, and watching the people in Atlantis deal with him.

Someday, I think I'll have to write about someone in Atlantis who really dislikes children.

neptune47 January 17 2010, 09:05:26 UTC

Love it! That was so adorable!

BTW--LOL @ Sam the Blue Whale :).

tielan January 17 2010, 19:40:31 UTC

LOL @ Sam the Blue Whale

It was too tempting to pass up!

ninja007 January 17 2010, 10:44:38 UTC

Very, very cute!

I loved it!

tielan January 17 2010, 19:40:59 UTC

I'm glad you did! Thank you for commenting!

purple_cube January 17 2010, 11:38:23 UTC

"You kiss John," says Torran with impeccable logic for a two year old - or a twenty year old.

Hee! Very cute, a lovely start to my morning :)

tielan January 17 2010, 19:42:13 UTC

Torran can count to four at least. And he knows his mum means what she says. So when it's one more kiss and then Torran, well, she kissed John, didn't she? :D

Glad I got you a happy start. :)