NaNoWriMo, Excerpt 1

[nomorefeathers]

Well, I'm not quite where I should be on my word count yet, but I'm pacing myself, and I'm pretty happy with my progress at the moment. And thus, it's time for me to post my first excerpt

Comments

[epistretes]

For a start - well done for getting going. I never really see the point of crit in NaNo as it often kills the momentum, but good beginning so far.