Cost of a Secret Ch. 21/?

[nomdeplume13]

 

Comments

[vexed_wench]

I really like the small details you weave in.

Like Roy worrying about the paint chips and Liam.

The house was very easy to see. I am glad that people want to help , and worried tat Karen has more people.

She planed on getting pregnant? Was that for his genes?

I really liked it.

[nomdeplume13]

Thanks. She didn't plan on getting pregnant. She just used the pregnancy to her advantage once it happened.

[shinelumiere]

I love how you give it so many layers, and then just when we think we know all, you throw on a new layer!

[nomdeplume13]

Thanks so much. It's an onion, what can I say?

[shinelumiere]

onions are like ogres? but what would that mean for your fic?

[nomdeplume13]

I think it means it may get ugly.

[bloody_winged]

*squirms around* Daaaaaaaaaaamn! I want to know what happens neeeeeeeeext! *is impatient* XD
It's sooo mean of you to just leave us here (not that I expected anything less -.- XD) with more or less two cliffys to deal with *pouts* XD I want to know what happens next between Roy and Karen! AND of course what Ed and the others have found!!! *chews on lip*
This little snipet about Roy and Karen being together was great, even though I want to kill the bitch right now. It shows that there are actually woman who have still *some* of their senses left when it comes to Roy XD
Also I loved Roy trying to get into the house without falling on his face XD The picture I had in my mind right then was hilarious XDDD
Can't wait to read more! :D

[nomdeplume13]

I'm sorry. Two evil cliffies here. I'm glad you liked the little details in this chapter.

As for Karen, she really was a rational human being at one point. Then things changed.

Thanks for reading.

I can't wait for this update on ffnet anymore

[anonymous]

Just like you read on the subject. I'd rather review here now than wait for you to update on ffnet. I don't think you mind, do you?
Interesting how a person who doesn't need a drawn array appeared... gloved hands... uhm... I wonder who that person is...
And no matter what Ed's fanclub says... Roy's the BEST!
I liked your style of describing places and situations, Karen's house was one example of it.
Take care
MaryLover

Re: I can't wait for this update on ffnet anymore

[nomdeplume13]

I don't mind you reviewing here. I'm just happy to get the reviews.

I'm glad you're enjoying this so much and that the details on Karen's house fit for you in the story.

[tenshishanai]

so now I wait for the next part... damn... this woman... I really don't know what to make out of her... I just want them to be happy again.. safe in Central... just Ed, Roy and Liam (and Ed the cat...)

[nomdeplume13]

Thanks for reading. Yeah, Karen's an evil thing