Nightmare Update (about damned time, I know.)

[nomdeplume13]

Once it was obvious that Ed wasn’t in the room somewhere, Al stopped his search and began trying to explain to the guards and to Roy that Wrath had been there and likely used his alchemy to spirit away his older brother. Riza knew better than to doubt either of the Elric brothers by now, especially Al who was not prone to telling a few fibs here or

Comments

[vexed_wench]

That was so bittersweet, Anton stepping up to fix his wrong.
Everyone pulling together to save Ed, Wrath gets to be a boy a real boy!

Ed gets over all the trauma , but he lost the time spent healing with Roy.
I am sure they will rekindle something , they are so meant to be together.

I loved it.

[nomdeplume13]

Thanks. Yep, I've gone and made Wrath human in yet another story.

I'm glad you liked it.

[bloody_winged]

You know, I love and I hate you for that chapter. Well, ok, I could never really *hate* you, but... ;_; You can't do that!!! I feared something like that would happen as you said it doesn't end happily but... ;_; WHY! Ok, I can understand why, more than understand, but it still has to be really really hard on Roy *sighs

[nomdeplume13]

I thought you'd like the bits with Wrath. And I did warn you about the not-so-happy ending to this chapter.

The next chapter should be the last, so let's hope you like the way this ends.

[bloody_winged]

The next chapter should be the last, so let's hope you like the way this ends.

*frowns* Why do I get the feeling this won't exactly be what I hope for? *sighs* This sounds too much like: 'I already have an ending and maybe you'll like it but maybe you won't'
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...
;_; Now I *really* hope that it will all be ok... *sighs*

[nomdeplume13]

You'll just have to wait and see.

[amethyst_koneko]

I get a new chapter and, whoa!, look at what I got! "[The blast] fixed the rape in the only way it could. It had made him forget. It made him forget everything." *sobs uncontrollably* Noooo! Ed can't forget Roy! T_T What's this that bloody_winged is saying about this not going to end happily? I don't remember reading that. *sniffle* I wouldn't be as distraught as I am if I'd have known that this would end like that. *pouts* I'm very happy that Gluttony is gone, Anton paid for his crimes (so to speak), and Ed is restored but...but...*eyes well with tears* Ed forgot about his time with Roy! Roy's losing Ed before he ever really had him! Why?!? *bawls* (Well, I know 'why' but that's beside the point. It's just not...not FAIR dammit! *sulks*)

Great chapter btw! I love a good chapter - even if it does break my heart into little bitty pieces. I'm looking forward to the next (last?) chapter of this! :)

[bloody_winged]

Just to calm you down a bit, she told me in the chat while I was reading this chapter that it won't end happily - therefore I think she only meant this chapter. At least, I really really hope so >.

[amethyst_koneko]

*blushes furiously* oops. Sorry 'bout that. I can be a bit of a spazz sometimes! :) I hope nomdeplume meant this chapter too. If the whole story ends on a sad note, oh man!, I'm really gonna hate that. Here's to hoping nom doesn't let us down! :D

[bloody_winged]

*nods**nods* yeah. I think I'm going to throw a fit if it ends sad >.< (and don't worry, I'm the same with worrying >.<)

[hikaru_9]

Oh that was great. Lots of action and the ending of this chapter is good. I feel so bad for Roy. I wonder, has his eye returned to him as well as the change in Wrath and Ed? I'm sure at this point, it wouldn't even register to him if it had. I really like how this chapter came out though. It definitely ties it al together and i can tell you're mosly done. :D

[nomdeplume13]

Thanks. I was hoping it is tying together for the final chapter, whenever I finish it (though I've got a 3 1/2 page start.)

[shinelumiere]

remind me to read this through tomorrow if you see me, my head started spinning and I had to stop.

[nomdeplume13]

Sorry to hear you couldn't finish.

[shinelumiere]

oo, I still need to finish reading that...