Nightmare Update

[nomdeplume13]

Kiefer Sullivan was nervous as he went down into the cave. “Tristan, I don’t like it here,” he said to his older brother who was several steps ahead of him with his friend Peter.

“Be a man,” Tristan called back. “It’s just a cave, but I heard there’s a whole city down here once you get to the end.”

“And I heard there’s a monster that lives down

Comments

[vexed_wench]

So good all the extra details, so nice.

I love Ed and Roy and Riza and AL.

Wrath is such a fine little man.

[hikaru_9]

Very excited to see how this will go from here. I'm looking forward to seeing how Anton will deal; with the complications of Gluttony and the impending trial.

[bloody_winged]

(Yeah, I actually read the parts I missed. I already was depressed/mentally down - I thought it only could get better >.<)

But at least I didn't get into indifference^^ (that was my greatest fear reading, that something like that would happen while reading one of yours) I burst into tears, but I enjoyed reading it nonetheless^^ And I like that you let Wrath in again^^ (I just love how you write him. I never read a better one :D)
But you can't separate Roy and Ed :( That would be cruel (and yeah, I know all to well that you like being cruel to them... -.-) Not after all that has happened ;_;
The thing with Anton and Gluttony gets more interesting the more chapters you write. I'm really curious how that will end^^