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Dec 12, 2008 11:34

In a horrid attempt to write in Japanese and translate something that I wrote into Japanese, I have this. :| I dunno if it's good or not, so I thought I'd post it here and see if I could get any feedback.

暗いな曇りな空。あれは高かったな一つだけの超高層ビルでした、一つの物に伸ばす…
心形な月。
「二月。」
「え?」
声!僕は振り向く。
咽ばせる!
目を閉じる、心臓を土器がする、僕はあえぐ。黒いな手は僕の顔に覆う。闇を食べられる!
あんたの声に囁く。毒…
「ああ、橋よね?」
手を消える。でも…
悪夢か?

A dark, cloudy sky. There was a tall, lonely building. It reached up for one thing: a heart-shaped moon.

"Two days."
"Hm?"

A voice! I turned around.
I choked!
My eyes shut, my heart pounded, I couldn't breathe. There was a black hand covering my face. The darkness was trying to eat me!
Your voice whispered. Poison...

"Oh, you run then?" (this line is sooooo weird to me ;___; ahhhhh.)

The hand disappeared. But...
Is this a nightmare?

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