Comments | nokomis305: Fic: this war against your faith in me

nokomis305

Fic: this war against your faith in me

Sep 09, 2005 22:44

I have a ficlet offering, mostly written in the basement of the library between classes today.

Title: this war against your faith in me

Summary: When she decided that the best way to make a clean break was to rip apart the hearts of those who loved her most, she hesitated.

Rating: PG

Word count: 764

Notes: For rainpuddle13, just because. Title borrowed ( Read more... )

fic, hp: pansy parkinson, hp: ron weasley, hp: ron/pansy, het

Comments 12

rainpuddle13 September 10 2005, 03:18:27 UTC

I've already told you how much I loved this, but it's worth saying it again. I LOVED it. The twist at the end is perfect. I'm all thinking D/G (because you know my brain only functions on that ship), but the twist at the end rocks!!!

You out do yourself with every fic!!!

THANK YOU!!!!

*huggles*

nokomis305 September 11 2005, 21:34:50 UTC

*grins* It's not hard to abuse your D/G mindset, especially since you know I've been promising to write you D/G forever now. *g* Thanks for reccing me!

dragonsangel68 September 10 2005, 14:35:47 UTC

This is just brilliant! All along I'm thinking Ginny is going over to the DE's and it's Pansy! Is in awe of your skill :)

nokomis305 September 11 2005, 21:52:56 UTC

Thanks! I'm thrilled that you enjoyed it. I enjoy being sneaky, it's fun. :)

venetianglass September 10 2005, 15:10:55 UTC

I'm totally astounded. The entire time I'm thinking Draco and Ginny and then it's Pansy and Ron! There's nothing in the entire fic that gives it away. This was most excellent.

nokomis305 September 11 2005, 21:49:52 UTC

Yay! I wrote it as Pansy/Ron but thinking of D/G the entire time, and I'm delighted that it actually came through in the story! Thank you so much!

sevedra September 10 2005, 17:10:24 UTC

I got here through a link at Rainpuddle's journal...

This was an excellent story! I admit that I thought it was D/G, but I really like that it was Pansy/Ron. I hadn't thought much about a P/R relationship before about 3 weeks ago and now, it just seems more and more acceptable every time I hear it.

nokomis305 September 11 2005, 22:35:33 UTC

Howdy!

I like the Ron/Pansy dynamics... probably because they're similar to D/G, my main ship, but also because they're different, and in a lot of ways it's easier to manage, since they don't have quite the baggage D/G does. So, yeah, I think it's a fun ship too. :) Thanks for commenting!

zuvalupa September 11 2005, 09:17:49 UTC

Wow! I so totally thought this was D/G at first! An excellent and wonderfully wicked twist at the end!

♥

nokomis305 September 11 2005, 22:36:25 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm happy my little attempt at misdirection actually worked! :)