Fic: Deluge (Lucius/Bellatrix, R)

[nokomis305]

Title: Deluge
Summary: The distribution of power has shifted within Malfoy Manor.
Pairing: Lucius/Bellatrix, Lucius/Narcissa
Rating: R
Word count: 1987
AN: A (very! *is shamed*) belated bday fic for the lovely and talented rainpuddle13! Huge thanks to tangleofthorns for the beta. Mild spoilers for DH.

Comments

[rainpuddle13]

*snuggles Lucius*

My poor darling. He's damned if he does, and most definitely damned if he doesn't. Bella is wicked, wicked, wicked. I'm surprised Voldemort isn't more afraid of her. Draco has the good sense to get as far away from her as he can before he is poisoned by his aunt. Unfortunately, Lucius doesn't seem to be immune to her particular brand of poison. I'm sure he's angry, bitter and frustrated at his situation - at being beholden to his wife for guidence and protection - that he looks to any means necessary to gain just a bit back of what he'd once had. So it involves shagging Bella and dismissing her, then so be it!

I am so proud of you for this! You took it further than you ever had before - this almost borders on a bit a smut... *YAYAYAYAY*

Thank you so much! *huggles* It was worth the wait!

[dragonsangel68]

Oh my poor Lucius *pats him* He is being played between the two sisters. Mind you, my money is on Narcissa *eg*

[melfinatheblue]

Poor Lucius.
Wonderful, simply wonderful. Bella's wow. I love the idea of her talking to the Dark Lord like a gossiping teenager, and the Dark Mark thing is just creepy and awesome.

[starstruck2]

This is fantastic! Dark and sexy and delicious! Great work!

[bloodrebel333]

not even bothering to smooth down his disarrayed hair

I like the dealogue, like Bella acting like a lovestruck teenage girl around the Dark Lord, his low, private words, I like how Narcissa goes out to protect her territory from her sister, like the resemblances between the Black sisters, Draco's frightened hurry to get away from them.