Comments | nokomis305: Fic: Like Flowers on an Empty Grave (Jason/Steph, PG-13)

nokomis305

Fic: Like Flowers on an Empty Grave (Jason/Steph, PG-13)

Feb 17, 2007 11:23

Title: Like Flowers on an Empty Grave
Characters: Jason Todd/Stephanie Brown
Summary: Kids like them weren’t good enough to be Robin. Not for long, anyway.
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 1143
AN: For Katarik, who requested Steph and Jason on my Valentine's drabble offer. Since it is my admittedly elementary understanding that Jason was whammied back into the ( Read more... )

fic, dc: stephanie brown, dc: jason todd, dc: jason/steph, het

Comments 16

tsukikarp February 19 2007, 20:01:17 UTC

Oh. My. God. That was wonderful, beautiful, and cruel. Seriously amazing. You captured Jason to a T; I LOVE the sexually charged / "Daddy-Bat" issues thought process. This was the kicker for me:

He wondered if Bruce had ever bent her over the car to flip up that joke of a skirt. What he thought of the way the ‘R’ jutted over those lovely tits, strangely foreign under the familiar red tunic. Whether there’d been discussion of the tactical advantages of being brunette

This whole fic was just too, too perfect! Thanks for the great read.

Always, Tsuki

nokomis305 February 21 2007, 15:41:57 UTC

I'm so glad I captured Jason; I adore him so. The Bruce issues always seem to leak in anywhere Jason goes. His devotion is downright scary at times. Then throw in Steph, a real replacement for Jason, and sparks fly.

*beams* I'm thrilled that you enjoyed this! Thank you so much! ♥

rubynye February 19 2007, 21:05:15 UTC

There are a thousand things I could say in praise of this story. What I'll say is that it's perfectly done. *applauds you*

nokomis305 February 21 2007, 15:43:46 UTC

*beams* Thank you! I'm so happy/relieved when I can do these characters justice.

dariclone February 20 2007, 00:06:26 UTC

That was lovely and dark and twisty. Thank you!

nokomis305 February 21 2007, 15:44:37 UTC

Exactly what I hoped for. Thank you!

novembersmith September 12 2010, 11:39:39 UTC

Kids like them weren’t good enough to be Robin. Not for long, anyway.

No matter how hard they tried or how much good they did, it was never enough.

OH FINE, JUST TAKE MY HEART, THEN. I WASN'T USING IT ANYWAY.

And if they’d warned her- if they’d burned his broken image in her mind - she would have recognized him by now.

Oh oh oh, he thinks they've FORGOTTEN him and that no one cares, and ohhhh, bb. He's just so broken and jealous and lonely and raw, and Steph's like seeing himself in a hotass time-portal sexswapped mirror. Oh, ROBINS. ;_________; That Bat surely does know how to fuck them up. Or maybe it's the not knowing that he does it that's the point? IDEK ANYMORE. I JUST NEED A HUG. THIS IS TOO SAD FOR ME, JASON AND BRUCE NEED TO GO HAVE SOME HOT HOT BITEY SEX AND CUDDLE STEALTHILY IN THE AFTERMATH. ;_______;

ps: WHAT HAVE YOU DONE TO ME :\