5th Drabble-Day of Christmas!

Dec 17, 2006 12:27

For Xnymphadorax, who requested Dumbledore/McGonagall on Christmas Eve just before midnight

Title: Time and Tide
Characters: Albus Dumbledore/Minerva McGonagall
Word count: 268
Rating: PG

Time and Tide )

hp: albus dumbledore, drabbles, fic, hp: albus/minerva, hp: minerva mcgonagall

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nokomis305 December 18 2006, 16:56:30 UTC
Thank you!

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xnymphadorax December 17 2006, 18:07:44 UTC
*squee!!!!* I loved it! Loved it, loved it, loved it! It's hard, I think, to capture Albus and Minverva; to stay true to their characters and to also explore realms outside of the classroom. For Minerva especially, but I think you succeeded spectacularly! I loved the subtle romance that seems to literally surround them here, the ambiance was just right. Mostly, I loved how believable this was, for me that's most important. I want to be able to see my two favorite grown-ups being, well, grown-ups and not professors. Thanks so much. It was more beautiful than I could have ever anticipated.

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nokomis305 December 18 2006, 17:04:19 UTC
I'm so glad you liked it! I didn't want them acting like giddy schoolchildren, because their maturity and wisdom are what make them such interesting characters. Also, yay, the ambiance was what I really wanted to work out nice, because I could just imagine them comfortable with each other and their adoration for each other. I'm so glad I got the characterization right! Thank you!

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embe11ished December 17 2006, 18:45:17 UTC
I love Albus's attitude in this--it seems so consistent with what we see of him in canon, and it is a wonderful attitude in general. No wonder Minerva feels safe with him!

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nokomis305 December 18 2006, 17:00:16 UTC
He's so wonderfully optimistic, even in the darkest of times. It's what made him a great leader, and a great Headmaster. I'm glad you liked it!

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dragonsangel68 December 18 2006, 00:13:30 UTC
So beautiful! I loved it when he called her young :)

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nokomis305 December 18 2006, 16:58:10 UTC
Thanks! *g* Well, in his eyes, she's still the same girl she was when she arrived at Hogwarts to teach, just with more stories to tell.

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nokomis305 December 18 2006, 16:59:10 UTC
Thank you! I think Albus is one of the very few people allowed to see Minerva in any sort of weakness.

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