*squee!!!!* I loved it! Loved it, loved it, loved it! It's hard, I think, to capture Albus and Minverva; to stay true to their characters and to also explore realms outside of the classroom. For Minerva especially, but I think you succeeded spectacularly! I loved the subtle romance that seems to literally surround them here, the ambiance was just right. Mostly, I loved how believable this was, for me that's most important. I want to be able to see my two favorite grown-ups being, well, grown-ups and not professors. Thanks so much. It was more beautiful than I could have ever anticipated.
I'm so glad you liked it! I didn't want them acting like giddy schoolchildren, because their maturity and wisdom are what make them such interesting characters. Also, yay, the ambiance was what I really wanted to work out nice, because I could just imagine them comfortable with each other and their adoration for each other. I'm so glad I got the characterization right! Thank you!
I love Albus's attitude in this--it seems so consistent with what we see of him in canon, and it is a wonderful attitude in general. No wonder Minerva feels safe with him!
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